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JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

0 posted 2001-02-23 06:43 AM

A Certain Intimacy

My life has prepared me for this?
For a woman that doesn't want me!
There has to be a lesson in this!
My past has come back to haunt me?
Hope I don't make this harder on you than it has to be.
Let me quickly say my final goodbye and bow out gracefully.
I know from experience that the sun will still faithfully shine.
The stars will twinkle on moonlit nights whether or not you are mine.
The universe will still carry on the same as ever
even thou we two are apart and no longer together.
I know the rivers will still flow.
The mountain tips will be topped with ice and snow.
We were just two small insignificant objects that kissed
and shared some moments in time.
Surely I'll wake up in the morning and hear the birds softly singing
and everything will be fine.
Til than I'll shed some tears for love.
A love that will never be.
Looks like she has no need for my heart.
A heart given to seeking intimacy
and now that we are apart
a heart doomed to bleed.

Jameslee@February22,2001

[This message has been edited by JamesMichael (edited 02-23-2001).]

Sunshine

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Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

1 posted 2001-02-23 07:17 AM

This reminds me of an old song....well done James....keep letting it out....

nakdthoughts
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since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

2 posted 2001-02-23 08:15 AM

but you did ...share some moments in time.

*s

~Wynter

"The worst prison would be a closed heart".
...Pope John Paul II

Celeste
Senior Member

since 2000-11-11

Posts 597

3 posted 2001-02-23 08:24 AM

It's difficult to learn that lesson, that time does go on, in spite of all. This touched me deeply. I definitely know this feeling.
Very nice job on the write!

"The secret of change is to focus all of your energy, not on fighting the old, but on building the new.

Socrates

jellybeans
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since 2000-10-13

Posts 2298

4 posted 2001-02-23 09:40 AM

ouch...that hurts...but yep...the birds do still sing, if you have ears to hear them...nice writing...like how you said this

SEA

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Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

5 posted 2001-02-23 10:55 AM

I know she's out there...........just waiting for you James......I have faith and hope......I guess guys have to kiss a lot of frogs too eh? Hugs, SEA

Corinne
Member Ascendant

since 1999-10-28

Posts 5167
state of confusion

6 posted 2001-02-23 04:08 PM

James,

You have penned your hearbreak so well,
the pace and rhythm are perfect.

As to you heart, sounds as though
she wasn't good enough for you,
after time to heal, you will
undoubtably find love anew.

Corinne

Voiceless
Senior Member

since 2001-02-19

Posts 686
Under the stars upon the wind

7 posted 2001-02-23 04:53 PM

It flows wonderfully
and brings back the memories of times
long forgotten..

~*Peachy Be*~

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