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Eternally Emerald
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Eternally Emerald |
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Snow
since 2000-10-16
Posts 1170desert flower looking for rain 
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Eternally Emerald My sanctuary, my beacon... with you in my life... I always know where home is The world could be on fire and in your arms I would find the towering strength that has kept me safe... The population could suddenly go deaf, and yet they would hear how loudly your eyes speak The food for my soul would be the fortress you've given me risking everything and thinking nothing of it And in return ... What do I have for you? Only the color of my love that will eternally blanket your soul "...I am a river in winter, quiet in the eyes of most but deep, swift and full of life to one, lucky enough to fall through the ice. |
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insect Senior Member
since 2000-04-22
Posts 1014 |
Your Emerald heart shines  in this one Very nice poem!  |
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Poeminister Senior Member
since 2000-02-26
Posts 1862Regina SK; Canada |
Lovely affections...Very beautiful piece... Poeminister "...no single sound too rude upon thy slumber shall intrude, Our thoughts, our souls- O God above! In every deed shall mingle, love." -Poe |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
This is so beautiful, my friend.....I love the thoughts that fill my mind as I read your words!!  Write on! -<--<--{(@ |
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Kit McCallum
Administrator
Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
Beautiful sentiments Snow, a wonderful picture of love, nicely done! Best wishes, /Kit |
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Snow
since 2000-10-16
Posts 1170desert flower looking for rain |
insect, thank you, your comment is very much appreciated. Poeminister, I'm glad you thought so, thank you Sunny1...well at least it was a feel good one that left the images.. the darker ones are kind of odd little pictures.. *smiling* thank you for the comment ;-) Kit, thank you very much! Snow |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
Me thinks the beacon shines from the heart in splendid fashion, snow...well said you. jwesley |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
Me thinks the beacon shines from the heart in splendid fashion, snow...well said you. jwesley |
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Pixydust Junior Member
since 2001-01-14
Posts 36 |
i can sense the devotion in this poem... it's very touching nice job of showing your affection |
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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida |
very sweet..romantic.. "My sanctuary, my beacon... with you in my life... I always know where home is" what a great line..! hugs, g "a love declared for days to come, is as good as none" -tracy chapman |
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Lady Lightning Member
since 2000-12-04
Posts 422Kentucky |
Great Job, Snow...I loved this ,I did...The title drew me in as my birthstone is emerald along with the eyes... ...This I wanna keep.. Hugs ~LL~The way to love anything is to realize it might be lost. author unknown |
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