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Can You See? |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869
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Have I ever told you how much I love you? can you see the faithfulness of my eye's? can you feel in the softness of my kiss? can you hear in the passion of my sigh's? There is no way you could ever know what I feel in the seclusion of my heart how much you have touched my life love created like a medley, not apart You are the music within my being the opus in the orchestra of the night our love is a fine sculpture of art It is created in Devine vigil light Love flow's within the salt of my tear's created within music of the sphere's A poem is never finished, only abandoned. - Paul Valery (1871-1945) |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
There is no way you could ever know what I feel in the seclusion of my heart how much you have touched my life love created like a medley, not apart You are the music within my being the opus in the orchestra of the night our love is a fine sculpture of art It is created in Devine vigil light Love flow's within the salt of my tear's created within music of the sphere's ================== beautiful Victoria ... a lovely sincere dedication of heart read like a song...had a melody dancing in the rhyme take care jm No one ever told me ... I could get lost while standing still ... and sorrow doesnt make a sound ... as it takes away all your will. |
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maxtec1 Senior Member
since 2000-12-09
Posts 577Garland, Tx |
Wonderful writing. I loved the feelings it left me with. Love and light, Richard |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
thank you janet marie and rich..I appreciate your commments..nice to hear from you..  ~V~ A poem is never finished, only abandoned. - Paul Valery (1871-1945) |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
nice poem |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
thank you vandana..nice to hear from you ~V~ A poem is never finished, only abandoned. - Paul Valery (1871-1945) |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Victoria you just told me right now...James |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
thank you darling james  ~V~ A poem is never finished, only abandoned. - Paul Valery (1871-1945) |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Ah, if only they could really see..You have said it perfectly, as always. Sandra |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
thank you hon..always nice to hear from you..HUGS ~V~ A poem is never finished, only abandoned. - Paul Valery (1871-1945) |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
Oh Victoria what a tender render of heart...well penned hon ~HUG~ Tracie~ Love is the life of the soul... It is the harmony of the universe |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
Such melody from within thy heart expressed so eloquently in the poetry you write... I thank you for this enjoyable read... *~coco~* |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
thank you Coco and Tracie..i appreciate your kind words..and for peeking in.HUGS ~V~ A poem is never finished, only abandoned. - Paul Valery (1871-1945) |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
'...love created like a medley...' as is this beautiful work of art, my friend. I do so enjoy reading your writings!!  Write on! -<--<--{(@ |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Very beautiful my friend. It is so nice when you pen one of yours straight from the heart. It is easy to see the strength of your love in your writing. |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
Thank you Sunny...and i am always happy to hear from you sweet lady..HUGS.. Thank you so much Mark..i am always pleased to see your responses...hope your weekend is going great. HUGS ~V~ A poem is never finished, only abandoned. - Paul Valery (1871-1945) |
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