Open Poetry #12 |
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Opal |
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Jazzmole Junior Member
since 2001-02-15
Posts 30Texas |
My heart(sad forgotten he) an opal in a riverbed. Your voice is the water rushing, wearing him down to the true surface of wondrous, revealing flecks of vibrant color. Your eye is the sun set on illuminated he, as so graceful you reached down to hold a smooth, polished stone (gently impressed upon your palm) my soul that you, carrying for miles, cast into your calm pool. This peaceful only gently disturbed by two golden fishes(gliding they) beneath the reflection of a thousand surrendering flowers in love's exotically endless garden. Michael~ |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Your eye is the sun set on illuminated he, as so graceful you reached down to hold a smooth, polished stone (gently impressed upon your palm) my soul that you, carrying for miles, cast into your calm pool. ============== outstanding use of metaphor and imagery wonderful use of elemental comparisons to express the emotions very cool poem ... paints a lovely scene of serene for the reader very well done poet sir jm Love is my religion, I believe in nothing else. To find that inspiration, live that inner vision. Love is my religion...I believe in you. ~T Kimmel |
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Lady In White![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2001-02-12
Posts 2799USA |
quote: what a pretty sound.... |
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