Open Poetry #12 |
Special Friendship |
Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
you're there when i need you to ease my trouble and listen to me and as everyday passes i'm beginning to see... i'm beginning to see who you are as we become closer, more than just a friend i don't know where this path will take us but my broken heart is beginning to mend no, you're not a rebound you are much more special than that i really enjoy your company that is a simple fact with your soft laugh and sweet smile you are slowly winning over my heart funny to think its only been a few months when this special friendship got its first start last night was simply wonderful i felt free and whole like when rain comes pouring down and it cleanses and renews the soul this morning when i woke i slowly opened my eyes and thoughts of you came to my mind as i simply let out a sigh Amy M. Kennedy "A friend is someone who knows the song in your heart & can sing it back to you when you have forgotten the words." |
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Puck Junior Member
since 2001-02-21
Posts 14Oberon's Palace |
Amy this is wonderful, I'm not surprised that you have a wonderful beautiful friend a special friendship that makes you feel as wonderful as your heart is. I've sprinkled you with my fairy dust so you should feel the magic begin. Very very well written Iam that merry wanderer of the night I jest to Oberon, and make him smile Puck |
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snowpants Member Elite
since 2000-09-16
Posts 2061KS |
'last night was simply wonderful i felt free and whole like when rain comes pouring down and it cleanses and renews the soul this morning when i woke i slowly opened my eyes and thoughts of you came to my mind as i simply let out a sigh' This is beautiful, Aims...what a feeling, huh?? You have described this wonderfully, m'friend!! -e ~~~~~ everytime I close my eyes, I see your face, I taste you on my lips... every night I fantasize that I can feel you on my fingertips... |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
Amy, it sure does my heart to read these words from you and see you back here! I know the desire to feel whole, and you are there, young lady! "When red-haired girls scamper like roses over the rain-green grass, and the sun drips honey." Laurie Lee [This message has been edited by Kathleen (edited 02-21-2001).] |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
wonderful words my friend. . . ------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Amy that sure is romantic and beautiful! I love the way you developed this with such poetic grace...I wish you the very best if this about you.....you deserve it !! |
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Parker Member Elite
since 2000-01-06
Posts 3129ON |
hey waiter.... I want what she's having. Amy, this was such a wonderful piece. Beautiful flow and just ful of love. Parker |
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Lady In White
since 2001-02-12
Posts 2799USA |
A lovely write....mend away..... |
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