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Can I Be
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Can I Be |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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Can I be Can I make you smile today? If only in the smallest way. Can I be your clown? To take away that frown. Can I be your butterfly? Bring a twinkle to your eye Can I be your fool? And say you are a precious jewel. Can I be your fondest wish? Perhaps a chocolate candy dish. Can I be a summer’s day? Chase away the dreary gray. Can I be a piece of fruit? To touch upon those lips so moot Can I be any of these? A dream upon a breeze. Perhaps a little snow white dove To whisper you of whom I love. |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
You always bring a twinkle to my eye, Sy..  |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
No twist to my arm...you can be all of this... |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Can I make you smile today? If only in the smallest way. Can I be your clown? To take away that frown. Can I be your butterfly? Bring a twinkle to your eye Can I be your fool? And say you are a precious jewel. Can I be your fondest wish? Perhaps a chocolate candy dish. ================= Can I be a piece of fruit? To touch upon those lips so moot ================= Perhaps a little snow white dove To whisper you of whom I love. ================ well you must be doing something right cause I am smiling now... how could we not after reading this rhyme kissed gift. so what kind of fruit? ... wouldnt happen to be a raspberry would it LOL and chocolate covered cherries rule  and while you can be a clown and turn a frown...upside down ... a fool you could never be ... not even with the help of ole Randy. *L* *winkiewinkie* Sweet Stinky later-winkietwinkleofmyeye-gator  me Love is my religion, I believe in nothing else. To find that inspiration, live that inner vision. Love is my religion...I believe in you. ~T Kimmel |
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JLR Senior Member
since 2001-02-04
Posts 1785 |
I wish you could! Ha! I love this poem. And wish I could still ask such a wonderfully simple (read profound) question. |
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inot2B Member Elite
since 2000-09-18
Posts 2205Arkansas |
Now I sit here with a smile because you are so versatile a chocolate candy dish that is what I'd really wish You sure do know how to start a ladies day!  |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Nan, And you are the twinkle of my eye. *L* Sunshine, Thank you sweet. *L* JM, Randy says a passion fruit. LOL Winkiewinkie Stinky JLR, Thank you for a wwonderful comment. into2B, OK on the chocolate candy dish. LOL PS Thanks |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
This is so sweet, Sey! Corinne |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
One of my fondest wishes is a chocolate kiss from my sweethearts lips...James |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Thank you Corinne. James, Me too, Thanks |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Yes..you can be all those Sy!! Lovely poem. |
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Meadowmuse Member Elite
since 1999-12-27
Posts 3263 |
Simple and wistful sweet, Seymour. A very pretty poem. Thanks for it. Claire Could a greater miracle take place than for us to look through each other's eyes for an instant?......Henry David Thoreau |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Seymour - what a wonderful writing, and I thoroughly enjoyed it. I can't critique, as I find nothing at present to critique, it's just great. BC |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
DeVine One, Thank you for the lovely. Meadow, Thank you claire. Bill, Thank you for the great. |
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