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Country Blued
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Country Blued |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines 
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Country Blued I'm feeling country blued today A deeper shade of you. I reach to send a kiss on winds They're strong in here, that's true. I follow movements in my thoughts Of eyes that rest on mine. In darkness light will rise a smile Upon a heart, to shine. Words that water, flowing sighs In timid touch of real. I grace my fingers to my lips To taste, your warmth of feel. Cast off my gown of blue this eve When shimmers glow from moon. The watered words expressed upon Reflect, in turn, dark's tune. In shadows, hope of moment kissed In silence laced in full, This void will closet me in feel Caressed within your pull. Though country lights in night are few, The indigo of skies Delivers you to light my dreams In sleep, behind closed eyes. ~Wynter "The worst prison would be a closed heart". ...Pope John Paul II [This message has been edited by nakdthoughts (edited 02-21-2001).] |
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Dennis Member
since 2001-02-19
Posts 235Indiana |
Don't be blue! I never knew Wynter could be so beautiful! Dennis |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
This is great...I love the colours of blue and the beauty of this piece is exceptional! The poet is like a cocoon; in him the caterpillar of the past finds rest, and from him the butterfly of the future emerges. |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
I love this one Wynter. . . the thought of blue is perfect. . .  ---------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
GirlFriend ! This is gorgeous ! A little blue becomes you ! I just enjoy your thoughts so much. You are certainly versatile ! ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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JLR Senior Member
since 2001-02-04
Posts 1785 |
This void will closet me in full... I have missed being here and reading words such as yours. |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Wynter - you are beautiful, and you write the same way. Don't ever stop, you romantic you. BC |
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Lady In White
since 2001-02-12
Posts 2799USA |
What a wonderful title....and enjoyed the poem as well.... |
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walker Member Elite
since 2001-02-11
Posts 2240Florida |
Very beautiful and inspiring! A quarter of a century must pass, for the writer to understand what and why he writes. |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Dennis ..ahhhh but blue is a favourite of mine and I thank you for the "beautiful"  E...you are always so sweet..huggz to you dear..I am waiting to emerge... Sven...hmmmmmm my blues are so shaded it's scarey sometimes..thank you huggzzz Marge...I do look nice in blue thank you for noticing and this is so true at least for me...~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ JLR...Well I for one am glad you are here to read..and respond. I hope all is going well for you. Bill... ah you make me blush, you do wear glasses right? hmmm speaking of romantics...Lady In White ...Well I was going to be Shaded Blue but I am in the country and rather protected by most that is wrong with society...so I changed it thank you.. walker... so glad you liked ..thank you ~Wynter "The worst prison would be a closed heart". ...Pope John Paul II |
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