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Where I belong |
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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace 
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Where I belong I am weak, I am strong I will fit where I belong don't know where it is for now but it will come, if I allow tomorrow, I start a brand new day with all the flowers in my bouquet I'm not afraid as I once was tired of looking through life's gauze pulling it down, running straight through the other side has a different view looking for so much more finding it as I now explore giving all I have to give a different life now to live |
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Dennis Member
since 2001-02-19
Posts 235Indiana |
You belong in the middle of an entire room full of flowers. Your writing is wonderful, right from the heart, I like that! Dennis |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
it all begins with that first step. . . wonderful helen. . .  ------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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snowpants Member Elite
since 2000-09-16
Posts 2061KS |
Wow...great flow to this, Helen! I love it! sp  everytime I close my eyes, I see your face, I taste you on my lips... every night I fantasize that I can feel you on my fingertips... |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
Where I belong I am weak, I am strong I will fit where I belong don't know where it is for now but it will come, if I allow tomorrow, I start a brand new day with all the flowers in my bouquet I'm not afraid as I once was tired of looking through life's gauze pulling it down, running straight through the other side has a different view looking for so much more finding it as I now explore giving all I have to give a different life now to live" Ok, Helen, how did you get inside of my head this evening! These are power words! know what I liked about this? You said "I am weak, I am strong." not denying that sometimes we are weak, and there's nothing wrong with being weak. But we are women, so we're strong also. I like that thought very, very much! "When red-haired girls scamper like roses over the rain-green grass, and the sun drips honey." Laurie Lee |
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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace |
dennis.......what a sweet thing to say.......i would love to be surrounded by flowers.......i'm glad you enjoy my writing.....helen Sven........every step after this one will be easy.....helen snowpants.......thanks, so glad you liked.....helen Kathleen...........we are many bodies........yet one heart......hugs.........helen |
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Parker Member Elite
since 2000-01-06
Posts 3129ON |
helen, very nice write truly enjoyed. Parker |
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Cerenity Member Elite
since 2000-02-16
Posts 2637Escondido-California |
Hi OneSlickLady, This is wonderful, standing solid in our own minds, enjoyed this very much thank you. Love, Cerenity "God doesn't have to be reminded that we exist. We have to be reminded that He exist!" (Writer Unknown) |
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maxtec1 Senior Member
since 2000-12-09
Posts 577Garland, Tx |
Like a flower With tender peddles Sweet sent Filling my nostrils Warmth of sun On naked skin Due drops On tender grass The wind Under eagle’s wing Spring rain To meadows lush Young chick In feathered nest Feelings of love To a lonely heart for you You belong Because You are you your words always touch me Richard |
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Voiceless Senior Member
since 2001-02-19
Posts 686Under the stars upon the wind |
You no doubt must live life to its fullest! ~*Peachy Be*~ |
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Krawdad Member Elite
since 2001-01-03
Posts 2597 |
Clearly, a part of you fits here, lady. Your fine work belongs in a place like this. We do enjoy! |
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DonFurr Member
since 2001-01-01
Posts 172Monticello IN |
Thank You for defining hope for me again. |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoy your read |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Lovely!! I hope you find what you're seeking. |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
wonderful expression I love the imagery of the gauze... thanks for sharing ~Wynter "The worst prison would be a closed heart". ...Pope John Paul II |
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bslicker
since 2000-12-04
Posts 2321state of mind |
You know where you belong. All you have to do is to take the first step forward to come back. The part of you for the first step to meet the world you want to create. You control the world around you, for the center of your universe should be your heart. Bernie Bernie Slicker |
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