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Rex Allen McCoy
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since 2000-01-30

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Sippin a Timmy's in London

0 posted 2001-02-21 01:17 PM

Huh?
~~~

Raffish steps
propel the dust
that drifts
between the ears
Sifting in
from pleasures crust
that heaps
ignored
for years
Though cobwebs mock maturity
they punctuate
the fears
When sorrow stings . . .
reality
then wisdom
grows . . .
from tears
~~~

Elizabeth

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since 1999-06-07

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Minnesota

1 posted 2001-02-21 01:19 PM

I like it.

Sunshine

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since 1999-06-25

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Listening to every heart

2 posted 2001-02-21 01:32 PM

heh heh heh....I knew you couldn't stay away....

welcome home Rex...

and thanks for this!

Poet deVine

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Hurricane Alley

3 posted 2001-02-21 11:18 PM

Nice to read you again sir! Welcome home.

Voiceless
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since 2001-02-19

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Under the stars upon the wind

4 posted 2001-02-21 11:28 PM

It's well done!
I enjoyed it!

serenity blaze
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since 2000-02-02

Posts 27738

5 posted 2001-02-21 11:49 PM

Have missed you my friend. Warm Welcome HUGS Home.

NC
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since 2001-02-20

Posts 89

6 posted 2001-02-22 12:00 PM

i enjoyed this one
very much...nice

Cerenity
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since 2000-02-16

Posts 2637
Escondido-California

7 posted 2001-02-23 01:11 PM

Hi Rex,

What a wonderful way to characterize fun filled in excess or stupidity in life, its amazing when one finds them selves looking back at how they spent there years, this is awesome thank you much for the enjoyable read.

Love, Cerenity

"God doesn't have to be reminded that we exist.
We have to be reminded that He exist!"

(Writer Unknown)

Corinne
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since 1999-10-28

Posts 5167
state of confusion

8 posted 2001-02-23 04:01 PM

You have continued to grow as a poet, Rex!
Nice and tightly written!

Corinne

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

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displaced

9 posted 2001-02-23 04:09 PM

I can so well relate...I see myself here, and that's sad.

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16

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Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

10 posted 2001-02-23 04:25 PM

Enjoyed reading this poem Rex...huh...James

Rex Allen McCoy
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since 2000-01-30

Posts 2863
Sippin a Timmy's in London

11 posted 2001-02-24 12:02 PM

Thanks everyone ... I haven't been writing much lately but I'm glad you like this one
I've started several but I seem to run out of steam, now they just sit

rosepetals25

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since 2000-05-31

Posts 3076
PA

12 posted 2001-02-25 02:17 PM

Rex Allen,

"Though cobwebs mock maturity
they punctuate
the fears
When sorrow stings . . .
reality
then wisdom
grows . . .
from tears
~~~"

Oh those words are soooo true. I'm so glad I stopped in.

I really liked it.. I'm glad to see your name again

And don't worry.. the words will come in time.

TaraB

[This message has been edited by rosepetals25 (edited 02-25-2001).]

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