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Open Poetry #12

I Believe (Senryu)

Poeminister
Senior Member

since 2000-02-26

Posts 1862
Regina SK; Canada

0 posted 2001-02-21 01:14 PM

I Believe

All my Religions
have guided me to a Sun
I believe I'm one

[This message has been edited by Poeminister (edited 02-21-2001).]

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

1 posted 2001-02-21 01:33 PM

welcome brilliance bright
and bask then in warmth of light
gets you through the night

VAS
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-16

Posts 7450
Oregon

2 posted 2001-02-21 01:59 PM

Oh, yes, let your light shine, but don't forget to go to the power source.

ethome
Member Patricius

since 2000-05-14

Posts 11858
New Brunswick Canada

3 posted 2001-03-23 03:39 AM

I can understand just what you mean and this is a great way to write it!

SEA

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Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

4 posted 2001-03-23 09:01 AM

This is really great

SEA

Mabel A. Dilley
Senior Member

since 2001-03-17

Posts 859
Seattle, WA, USA

5 posted 2001-03-23 11:01 AM

what sun is this that
returns warmth upon my heart
once again the rose?

"I am not now that which I have been."

Lady In White

Member Elite

since 2001-02-12

Posts 2799
USA

6 posted 2001-03-23 11:05 AM

Beautiful...

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