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Figgy Pudding and other Figments
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Figgy Pudding and other Figments |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart 
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Figgy Pudding and other Figments somewhere, all the thoughts must go somewhere ~ Dickens had his figgy pudding and I just have figgy moments and figments of imagination running rampant it’s not life, it’s not life… not real life, but what if, what if it were… up to you to decide if you want to ride that horse or not or leave it in the stable where you are able to tend and care and share some feed I want to ride…. onward to my figmented moments or should that be fermented moments… never let’s mind but let’s unwind and let our thoughts run free and you can write as you and I can write as me and whether it’s real life or just a fantasy it’s ok, it’s ok let those thoughts just be! I won’t look into your write and tear it apart just to find that you were having a figgy moment there in private spaces of the mind where there those thoughts can unwind and leave the gray of your confine and find their way to blue would you? Could you? In all reality wouldn’t you allow the fantasy of what you read to just let be? And as you come to know the me that lies within the fantasy and when you might see reality ~ well ~ just allow the figgy moment to show a figment of what might be and then and then take the thoughts that cross your mind there in those private spaces of your mind where there all those thoughts unwind and leave the gray of your confine and write your way to blue ~ would you? Karilea If I whisper, will you listen?... I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound. KRJ [This message has been edited by Sunshine (edited 02-21-2001).] |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
And as you come to know the me that lies within the fantasy and when you might see reality ~ well ~ just allow the figgy moment to show a figment of what might be and then and then take the thoughts that cross your mind there in those private spaces of your mind where there all those thoughts unwind and leave the gray of your confine and write your way to blue ~ would you? ====================== figgy pudding with a side of wisdom and rhyme divine ... very cool theme here Sun well done  Love is my religion, I believe in nothing else. To find that inspiration, live that inner vision. Love is my religion...I believe in you. ~T Kimmel |
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Puck Junior Member
since 2001-02-21
Posts 14Oberon's Palace |
Sunshine figgy figmented, I really love this one, it is as sprightly as I am it dances and sings and this is utterly splendid wonderful have some of my magic dust, not that you need it, but have some anyway  Iam that merry wanderer of the night I jest to Oberon, and make him smile Puck |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Sunshine--I say run with it...climb with it, fall with it, and most of all, write it, with care and wisdom sprinkled just like my friend, Karilea. |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
ahem! hummmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm for we all like figgy moments we all like figgy moments for we all like figgy moments so bring more today!!! wonderful Sunshine. . . ----------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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walker Member Elite
since 2001-02-11
Posts 2240Florida |
I agree with you, I just write. I don't erase, (bad habit), allot of mistakes. But you know what I don't mind. I don't like to critique others because I think that they are expressing it their way. Lovely thought on writing. |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
What a unique way to present such a terrific idea....typical Sunshine |
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Voiceless Senior Member
since 2001-02-19
Posts 686Under the stars upon the wind |
It''s so itself, but yet you can identify with it.. I love it! |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
I like the idea of letting my thoughts run free. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Karilea~ I like thoughts in shades of blue or green or yellow if they come from you Shucks, I don't even think I'd care if they were magically done pink As long as they say what YOU think ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
never let’s mind but let’s unwind and let our thoughts run free and you can write as you and I can write as me and whether it’s real life or just a fantasy it’s ok, it’s ok let those thoughts just be! I won’t look into your write and tear it apart just to find that you were having a figgy moment there in private spaces of the mind where there those thoughts can unwind and leave the gray of your confine ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ yes.....you know how to write on these blue pages....with grace and a warm heart. loved reading these wonderful poem....and yeah it goes in my library, my friend. ((hugs)) Charism |
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JLR Senior Member
since 2001-02-04
Posts 1785 |
A new word has entered my vocabulary (hey, maybe someday I'll see it in Reader's Digest). ...and write your way to blue... I love this line. It says more to me than you can know. |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Look at all the poets....thinking like I do....Bravo....Brava.....there's hope for me yet! Thank you all! |
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