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Like a Summer Rain
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Like a Summer Rain |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania 
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Like a Summer Rain You are like a summer rain Refreshing earth and air again Soft touches on a window pane You are the joy of summer rain You are the one to comfort me You are my morning cup of tea You sit and talk so lovingly And touch the very heart of me When evening shadows slowly fade And dampness sits on evening blade You are the sunlight unafraid To put to rest the hours paid You shower me in starlight’s bed With all the lovely things you’ve said And when the dawn peeks up it’s head There you are in sunrise red You are the hope, the joy, the love That flew on wings of mourning dove From winds afar and clouds above You came to smother me with love If anyone could touch my heart It would be you, it’s equal part If anything would sooth a pain It is the joy of summer rain Elizabeth Santos |
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Kit McCallum
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Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
Elizabeth ... this is one of the most delightful reads! The words just danced through my mind melodically ... a big happy sigh at the beauty you have penned here!  Best wishes, /Kit |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Elizabeth~ Such a lovely, lovely reminder of the effects of the rain on each of us. You do the rain a marvelous, drenching tribute. I love reading your views on nature as it relates to our relationship with life. Thank you always for sharing. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Not only a pleasant read, but one that exhibits the hope of tomorrows to come...this is lovely Lady Santos...and once again, you show your caring, loving heart... |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
*sigh* like a summer rain indeed. . . beautiful. . . ---------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Elizabeth, Your words reign and rain On my window pane. They make me breath a sigh Withour the question why. Love Sy |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
A tender and loving poem Elizabeth it is one that leaves the reader in breath of sighs... I thank you for this delightful read... ~coco~ You get a lot more lesson mileage when you lose in some situations than always win... |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
It must be raining everywhere! How lovely. "I walked beside the evening sea and dreamed a dream that could not be." George William Curtis |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Exquisite expression, as always, Elizabeth!! Very lovely!! |
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Mike Member Elite
since 1999-06-19
Posts 2462 |
Beautifully expressed... enjoyed muchly. |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
ahh an extra dose of Lizzie rhyme divine... love the full verse rhyme ... as always the melody of your cadence rises of the page ... the imagery brings it all together in this succinctly perfect piece. so well done poetess of grace  Tomorrow holds only mystery And who's to say what might be But in you I've found a love so strong The sun and the moon look on in jealousy ~VH~ |
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