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A Crystalized Stream
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A Crystalized Stream |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869
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Each sapphire raindrop is a tear that flows crystal wishes flowing from sad eyes rose-colored dreams, and salt laced bows Tears of blood and heartache in disguise aqua rapids, emotions running free sweet sugar coated and poison berry lies Hollow promises like stems of a trumpet tree heartbreak flowing,a crystalized stream turquoise teardrops, blending as they flee Tearsdrops hide in a weeping willow's regime blending with the farrago tears of the night motley teardrops become a kaleidoscope dream Raindrops flow blending tears of passions flight a weeping willow sobs emerald tears in moonlight < !signature--> A poem is never finished, only abandoned. - Paul Valery (1871-1945) [This message has been edited by Victoria (edited 01-13-2001).] |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
...and the imagery is woven through... Wonderful! |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
thank you Sunshine..nice to hear from you today..  ~V~ A poem is never finished, only abandoned. - Paul Valery (1871-1945) |
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Kit McCallum
Administrator
Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
Such a tender and sorrowful read Victoria ... you've expressed this so vividly ... very well done. Best wishes, /Kit |
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Poeminister Senior Member
since 2000-02-26
Posts 1862Regina SK; Canada |
Lovely flow and imagery in this...wonderfully penned. Poeminister "...no single sound too rude upon thy slumber shall intrude, Our thoughts, our souls- O God above! In every deed shall mingle, love." -Poe |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
And very colorfully expressed, I can see those sapphire raindrops and turqoise tears. Awesome poem, Vic. Smile. Sandra |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
thank you kit poeminister and sandra..i am pleased you enjoyed..thank you all for peeking in ~V~ A poem is never finished, only abandoned. - Paul Valery (1871-1945) |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
"Saw" this, all the way through. Wonderful. jwesley |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
thank you james..nice to hear from you as always ~V~ A poem is never finished, only abandoned. - Paul Valery (1871-1945) |
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Robert Joseph Member
since 2000-10-07
Posts 491South Carolina |
Raindrops flow blending tears of passions flight a weeping willow sobs emerald tears in moonlight Victoria, You've melded nature and color with tears...brilliantly sad, and effective writing. Robert Joseph |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
thank you Robert..it is nice to hear your comments today..and thank you for taking the time to visit ~V~ A poem is never finished, only abandoned. - Paul Valery (1871-1945) |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
Victoria, The imagery in your poem is breathtaking... The expression you penned tugs at the heartstrings... The bottom line, PoetFriend, is your poem embraced me and in simplier words you've shared an excellent write sweetie... hugs2uAlways~coco~ |
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Voiceless Senior Member
since 2001-02-19
Posts 686Under the stars upon the wind |
The imagery is beautiful while the poem flows as does the tears in your poem.. Well done! ~*Peachy Be*~ |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
I always say let those tears flow and in this case so eloquently...James |
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Alwye
Moderator
Member Elite
since 1999-06-16
Posts 3850In the space between moments |
What a wonderful combination of sorrow and exquisite imagery...truly well done, I enjoyed the read! *Krista Knutson* I'm a slow dying flower In a frost-killing hour The sweet turning sour and untouchable... -Natalie Merchant |
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