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Love's Song
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Love's Song |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
A special thank you to Kathleen for her help in editing this. I appreciate it.  The sun burns my skin As we sit together on the sand We speak of tomorrow As you take hold of my hand I am captured in your eyes They are wild as the ocean While I am with you The world is slow motion I can hardly believe We are talking like this Who knew that my life Could respond to such bliss Your voice is so soothing A symphony to my ear I sing with every word As you draw me near In your arms I know I belong Your music completes Love’s sweet song I hear it softly Floating on the air Letting me know You’ll always be there Poetry should surprise by fine excess...it should strike the reader as a wording of his own highest thoughts and appear almost a remembrance. -J.Keats |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Lone Wolf, S'Wonderful, Kathleen edited or not. You have done a good job with this. write on Kethry Those of us who refuse to risk and grow get swallowed up by life. Patty Hansen. |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
I told you not to say that, YOU wrote it, and it's great!!!!! "When red-haired girls scamper like roses over the rain-green grass, and the sun drips honey." Laurie Lee |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
This is very romantic...and I think Katleen should be happy that she helped you write such a wonderfully magic piece....keep it up!! The poet is like a cocoon; in him the caterpillar of the past finds rest, and from him the butterfly of the future emerges. |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
It's a very special feeling when one poet helps another poet put things together "just right"...as is this! |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
Indeed, Kathleen should be thanked for helping you with this. . . excellent words. . . --------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
And a wonderful love song it is!  Well expressed!~Take care, Melissa~ |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
Kethry . . . Thank you, just feeling good about life lately. Kathleen . . . I know I wrote it, but you made it a little better. My feelings are clearer now. ethome . . . Thanks, I am feeling more romantic these days my friend. Sunshine . . . Oh yes it is. Well, it was put together just needed some fine tuning is all. Sven . . . I did thank her although as she said, they are my feelings. Thanks. Melissa . . . Thank you!! It's about time we write some love songs I think!! Poetry should surprise by fine excess...it should strike the reader as a wording of his own highest thoughts and appear almost a remembrance. -J.Keats [This message has been edited by Lone Wolf (edited 02-23-2001).] |
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