You and I as though two ions

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Open Poetry #12

You and I as though two ions

Master
Senior Member

since 1999-08-18

Posts 1867
Boston, MA

0 posted 2001-02-19 11:34 PM

You and I as though two ions
Pull each other closer with
Feelings unexplained by science
Measured not in height or width,

Not in seconds, not in liters
Not in kilograms or grams
Not in meters—millimeters,
But in warmth of loving arms.

When my eyes begin to glisten
When I’m moving in unrest
Hold your breath and listen, listen
To the heartbeat in my chest,--

Hear it slowly growing rapid?
That’s because, when you are near
Anything, my love, may happened
Anything may happen, dear...

ethome
Member Patricius

since 2000-05-14

Posts 11858
New Brunswick Canada

1 posted 2001-02-20 05:33 AM

One of the most unexplainable things of all time....can't be measured as you write here...but the total passion is immeasurable...very good!

The poet is like a cocoon; in him the caterpillar of the past finds rest, and from him the butterfly of the future emerges.

Sven

Member Laureate

since 1999-11-23

Posts 14937
East Lansing, MI USA

2 posted 2001-02-20 07:47 PM

you have that gift Master, for seeing love in the most wonderful of ways. . .

this is no exception. . . excellent. . .

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

NC
Member

since 2001-02-20

Posts 89

3 posted 2001-02-20 09:13 PM

so romantic...
beautifully written

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