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To My Love
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To My Love |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
I dream of you Night and day Your gentle touch The words you say Speak to my heart Giving it hope No longer dangling By the end of the rope The sun shines In your sparkling eyes There is no fear You tell no lies Your love is true Sure and strong I know I am finally Where I belong Your arms enfold me Sheltering the storm My head on your shoulder Love in the simplest form Your kiss is like A caress on my lips To my heart It’s a total eclipse I feel your warmth In all you do Now my life’s So very new I place my faith In the man I see With his support I can at last be me His love makes me whole The emptiness is filled As the pieces rejoin The water’s are stilled Turmoil has left Never to be seen again The only question Where shall we begin? Poetry should surprise by fine excess...it should strike the reader as a wording of his own highest thoughts and appear almost a remembrance. -J.Keats |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
Begin! Begin! Ok, who is your muse!  I love it!!!!!!!!! "When red-haired girls scamper like roses over the rain-green grass, and the sun drips honey." Laurie Lee |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Beautifully romantic....that ending is really a catcher....begin just begin! I agree with Kathleen......get it on with love.....take care! The poet is like a cocoon; in him the caterpillar of the past finds rest, and from him the butterfly of the future emerges. |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
No doubt LW. . . who is your muse??? excellent. . . --------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Oh for Pete's sake, LW...in the kitchen if you must! Well done! |
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Dennis Member
since 2001-02-19
Posts 235Indiana |
One lucky man, is all I have to say, I just started reading and man oh man.......ummmm you won't be a lone wolf for long!!!!! |
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walker Member Elite
since 2001-02-11
Posts 2240Florida |
Very nice, well expressed. Just let the love flow.... A quarter of a century must pass, for the writer to understand what and why he writes. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Relaxing words like soaking in a warm bath...James |
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Temptress
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-06-15
Posts 7136Mobile, AL |
This, I love. The ending wraps it up nicely. |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
liked this much |
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ATelamon Member
since 2001-02-06
Posts 328Purgatory, Last Staircase, Up |
A very nice read. And what a pleasant decision your last line offers. May all choices be such AT "Time is merely change. It neither enslaves nor determines us. It is instead our opportunity for self-definition" |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
LW- yes! yes and yes!! this is beautiful. absolutely stunning and i can't tell you how happy i am to see you like this. this made my heart smile  so goodto see a post of yours and so upbeat. this is definitely going into my library! take care my friend... amy "A friend is someone who knows the song in your heart & can sing it back to you when you have forgotten the words." |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
Kathleen . . . Thank you, I believe I have.  ethome . . . I thought the end just fit. Thanks, and you take care too. Sven . . . You tell me yours and I'll tell you mine!! Sunshine . . . LOL. Moving into the kitchen as we speak!! Thank you! Dennis . . . Thank you!! Glad you enjoyed it. Welcome to Passions!! walker . . . It is already. James . . . What a lovely image my friend. Thank you! Temptress . . . I thought so too. Thanks for reading. vandana . . . AT . . . I hope they are too. Thanks. Amy . . . Always nice to make you smile my friend. Thank you for the kind words. I think it is time to look ahead for a change, don't you? Poetry should surprise by fine excess...it should strike the reader as a wording of his own highest thoughts and appear almost a remembrance. -J.Keats |
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