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Bleeding Soul.
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Bleeding Soul. |
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Daniel J D Senior Member
since 2000-10-01
Posts 1471Hillcrest, Queensland, Australia |
Bleeding Soul. The rage of the anger ceased The war of words are appeased My hand bleeds from thorns Piercing my palm's veins Stretching the red rose out to you Tumbling along the corridor of love Falling down the pits of terror's cove Sitting near the rocky shore Reflecting if it is worth it once more A deep gaze at the wavy horizon Sends a misty awakening in motion My soul has bled far too many times The search for happiness rhymes Through my fingers' joints As the depths of my words' points To a meaningful desire for freedom From the oblivion of near martyrdom It is here within my soul's anger At the very tip of my finger That the bleeding ceases to flow It is here within my poetry that I sow The seeds of happiness, and compassion For my soul needs a real companion The "Poem", my lifelong support Always there, in the midst of my discomfort Respond to my call and let the waves of my heart fill your life with the wonders of love (Daniel J D) |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
"For my soul needs a real companion The "Poem", my lifelong support Always there, in the midst of my discomfort" You have no idea how meaningful this entire poem is. Critique it? I cherish it! These last few lines flooded over me and brought such peace. Thank you for this, Daniel. I am also proud to be your friend. "When red-haired girls scamper like roses over the rain-green grass, and the sun drips honey." Laurie Lee |
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Daniel J D Senior Member
since 2000-10-01
Posts 1471Hillcrest, Queensland, Australia |
Kathleen, The joy of writing is the essence of poetry. Thank you so much for the reply, I am glad you liked this poem.. Respond to my call and let the waves of my heart fill your life with the wonders of love (Daniel J D) |
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sweetcollege_girl Senior Member
since 1999-12-03
Posts 872just about where I want to be |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
you translate your feelings quite well with your words, penned it right from your heart. thank you for sharing my friend. ((hugs)) Charisma |
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Katherine Chandler Member
since 2001-03-07
Posts 280Florida, USA |
Best verse: "For my soul needs a real companion The "Poem", my lifelong support Always there, in the midst of my discomfort" Daniel, this poem moved me to tears, such emotions I felt in reading the best verse and knowing that my writing is my sanity. Thank you for this exceptional piece of writing. KateBlessings Genuine poetry can communicate before it is understood. |
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