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rosepetals25
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0 posted 2001-02-18 05:53 PM



Lover's Plea

My eyes drift close
as your face enters
these worried thoughts.
I know the many miles that
are distancing us feel like forever.
My heart, feeling so alone,
calls out to yours
with a simple plea..
Please, my dear angel
hold on tight to the love we share.
Grasp tight to the strength
of our interlocking souls.
I humbly beg of you,
don't give up.
Don't turn away love yet to come.
Don't silence our dream.
The dream of eternity
in each other's arms.
The dream I need to believe.
Please my love, have faith in what we are.
In what we instintively know.
In what our hearts and souls
need to survive... exist.
Hold on just a little longer.
Let our love shine, forever warming our souls


TaraB

© Copyright 2001 Tara Baldridge - All Rights Reserved
Mark Bohannan
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1 posted 2001-02-18 06:56 PM


Tara, your plea is so sincere and so full of love that I don't see him wanting to ever let go. Wonderfully penned my friend and so glad to see you making it here to share with us again. Loved the read much.
Jesse Jaymz
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2 posted 2001-02-19 02:43 AM


i agree with mark. beautiful. anyone that is graced by your heart is blessed i loved this.
love you
jesse


True beauty is often hidden in darkness...

rosepetals25
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3 posted 2001-02-24 03:59 PM


Mark - Well.. it didn't work out like that... unfortunately. The relationship I was writing about has now ended. On a brighter note.. thank you for stopping in.. It always means alot to me to see your responses.

Jesse - My good friend.. big big hugs to you. Thank you for being so understanding and soooo wonderful to me. I cherish your friendship more than you know.

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