Open Poetry #12 |
It Just Depends |
Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
Desire is fire… it’s burning a hole in your soul… The fire is hot, but the ache that you feel, leaves you cold… You know love is futile, and what can’t begin, never ends… But fate points her finger, and all on desire depends… Temptation runs rampid… You’re out of control in your need… Your dreams in the night leave you hungry, with no way to feed… You’ve come face to face with your longings, they feel like old friends… Now choose your direction, and all on desire depends… Desire is fire… That burns deep, and into your soul… It’s flame licks your senses, and melts down your tough self-control… And when you think you’ve got it conquered, with modern day trends… Along comes the hunger, that still on desire, depends… Live...Love...Be grateful for both!! |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Desire is fire… That burns deep, and into your soul… It’s flame licks your senses, and melts down your tough self-control… And when you think you’ve got it conquered, with modern day trends… Along comes the hunger, that still on desire, depends… a perfect verse...*s ~Wynter "The worst prison would be a closed heart". ...Pope John Paul II [This message has been edited by nakdthoughts (edited 02-18-2001).] |
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walker Member Elite
since 2001-02-11
Posts 2240Florida |
Desire is fire... That's why we all get burn. I love every line, it makes sooooo much sense, its scary. Thanks for sharing your talent. |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
Thank you Wynter... I do enjoy seeing you stop by and always enjoy your replies!!! Thank you walker... Yes...we really do all get burned, but it's a human characteristic to jump back into the fire from the pan!!! OUCH!!!! Live...Love...Be grateful for both!! |
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Poeminister Senior Member
since 2000-02-26
Posts 1862Regina SK; Canada |
Your words are the truth...wonderful write. Poeminister |
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Ariana Senior Member
since 2000-10-08
Posts 571Orlando, Florida |
Sunny Your writing is full of wisdom. The words are so true. Do you have a crystal ball too! Keep writing! Ariana |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
Hello Poeminister... thank you...sometimes the truth is better felt from words that come from the heart, as in poetry. Hello Ariana... Thank you, my friend, and no...not a crystal ball. Just a sense of knowing that comes to me through my ancestors and their gift of gypsy blood!! One's crystal ball can be in one's mind, if you are willing to not just study human nature, but actually observe!! Live...Love...Be grateful for both!! |
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