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Bat - Man |
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Dr.Moose1 Member Elite
since 1999-09-05
Posts 3448Bewilderment , USA |
Sometime the cause of an affect may not be quite what you'd expect and then there's times when it rings true "bats in the bell-fry "? I've a few This is how I think they got in sit back , relax , and I'll begin a story of a kid at play and how he ended up this way 'twas Superman who caused it all he flew , I jumped , and took the fall my head impacted with a brick I wished it had been half as thick as I had heard my parents say then bats wouldn't have got in that day ! And that's my story sad but true right in that split a couple flew The mom soon called the other dad that's when things started getting bad 'cause that was forty years ago and they breed really fast yanno But it's ok I'm not in pain you can call me "guano" for brains and I'll not pout or take offence 'cause that just wouldn't make any sense Besides , I've got this crazy notion that all those bats and their commotion are in all probability what caused me to write poetry ! [This message has been edited by Dr.Moose1 (edited 02-16-2001).] |
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Mother_Earth Senior Member
since 2000-11-20
Posts 13701/2 year Texas & 1/2 year Michigan |
I love this!! I wish I had gotten some bats up top, but all I ever got was a headache. I just love this!! ME |
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ATelamon Member
since 2001-02-06
Posts 328Purgatory, Last Staircase, Up |
You share much fun in your inrospection. My thanks AT |
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David2 Member
since 2000-03-22
Posts 407 |
From an avid Superman and Batman fan, thanks for the tribute and humor contained within. David2 |
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Kit McCallum
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Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
Smiling here Dr. Moose ... what a fun piece, great poem!  Best wishes, /Kit |
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Cerenity Member Elite
since 2000-02-16
Posts 2637Escondido-California |
De Moose, De Moose you are "loose" again writing poetry from within! I enjoy your poetry so, give's me smiles from head to toe,,,  Love, Cerenity "God doesn't have to be reminded that we exist. We have to be reminded that He exist!" (Writer Unknown) [This message has been edited by Cerenity (edited 02-18-2001).] |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
*shining flashlight in your ear* yep yep I can see them flying in there...this is sooooo cute...least they dont look like this  HAHHA[This message has been edited by Paula Finn (edited 02-18-2001).] |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Hilarious and clever, Dr. Moose!! Delightful!! |
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Lighthousebob Member Elite
since 2000-06-14
Posts 4725California |
Dr. You must have a keen sense of direction with all them bats up there..... Hmmmm... didn't realize that they wrote poetry... I'll need to let a few more in myself. Loved it!!!!! Bob <>< |
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Meadowmuse Member Elite
since 1999-12-27
Posts 3263 |
At least you have an excuse. (o: This is swell, Doc. Thanks for it. Claire Could a greater miracle take place than for us to look through each other's eyes for an instant?......Henry David Thoreau |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
ROFL... whatever caused you to write, I'm glad! LOL. This is great!! |
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