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Rosebud1229
Senior Member

since 2000-04-05

Posts 1813
North Carolina

0 posted 2001-02-18 12:55 PM

I use to love you,
More than you'll ever know,
My heart seems to have taken a tow,
Underneath the deep blue sea,
Deep, deep within the abyss of this abduction,
Stolen tears confessed destruction,
I use to love you,
Though often, time apart the heart grows fonder,
Mine began to ponder,
So don't always presume,
That time heals all wounds,
For now you see my hearts fine tuned,
to a different melody,
My heart was always open,Now yesterday
presents the light,In a whole new ray,
I use to love you,
But that was not today.
That my darling I must confess,
If you only walked on by,
I would really really try,
To tell you there's no reason to react,
As a matter of fact,
I'd tell you, I never ever
want you back, not for now,
Not for then,
Not for a million stars,
and a special song sung,
so fare the well.

[This message has been edited by Rosebud1229 (edited 02-18-2001).]

Lady In White

Member Elite

since 2001-02-12

Posts 2799
USA

1 posted 2001-02-18 08:58 AM

Yes, sometimes it has to be this way....well done....

Kethry
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-29

Posts 9082
Victoria Australia

2 posted 2001-02-18 09:01 AM

Rosebud,
isn't it amazing what happens when we wake up and smell the coffee. Well written
Write on
Kethry

Those of us who refuse to risk and grow get swallowed up by life. Patty Hansen.

Mark Bohannan
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-21

Posts 7269
In the winds of Cherokee song

3 posted 2001-02-18 06:40 PM

This one leaves no doubt as to where you are at. Very powerful piece from you and your pen spoke wonderfully.

snowpants
Member Elite

since 2000-09-16

Posts 2061
KS

4 posted 2001-02-18 08:34 PM

'I use to love you,
Though often, time apart the heart grows fonder,
Mine began to ponder,
So don't always presume,
That time heals all wounds,
For now you see my hearts fine tuned,
to a different melody,'

I truly, truly love this one...it is great to be able to say this. Great write!

sp

everytime I close my eyes, I see your face, I taste you on my lips...
every night I fantasize that I can feel you on my fingertips...

Rosebud1229
Senior Member

since 2000-04-05

Posts 1813
North Carolina

5 posted 2001-02-18 11:34 PM

Sometimes love is a two-edged sword, and you must not always be the one being torn apart, glad you enjoyed the poem

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