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Frosted Whispers
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Snow
since 2000-10-16
Posts 1170desert flower looking for rain 
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Frosted Whispers While curled up in the easy chair tracing memories on frosted glass, listening to the laughter of the past whip through the barren trees and burst into a flock of mocking birds grinning at the foolishness of friends they wink with a knowing to Luna who came down to sit with me tonight, and I whispered to her just leave [This message has been edited by Snow (edited 02-17-2001).] |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
I read this three times Snow, and received three different gifts....well done....very well done.... |
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inot2B Member Elite
since 2000-09-18
Posts 2205Arkansas |
Beautifully written, I'm sorry you're so sad. |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
I love the feel of this, it truly whispers, but I have to say I'm taken aback by the last line...whatever could have happened that would bid you to say to Luna just leave? Oh, the thought is agony for me. |
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EagleScorpion Senior Member
since 2000-03-08
Posts 1644Here, Now, Forever |
I think i have an idea of how you must have felt. Cheer up |
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Snow
since 2000-10-16
Posts 1170desert flower looking for rain |
Sunshine, thank you! I'm so glad you said that. Although it's easy to assume the writer is feeling what they write, I really would like to say that is not always the case. This piece is done, simply because I love to create, I love the idea of layering so many thoughts and visions that you might be able to see further than the surface. I truly appreciate each and every comment, but I assure you I am no where near feeling sad. Just the opposite.. *smiling* Thank you all very much for taking the time to read and comment. Snow |
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