Open Poetry #12 |
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What is Love |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989![]() |
Is love that fuzzy feeling you get way down deep inside, is it that certain thing that makes people run and hide? Does it make your heart skip a beat with a single glance, is it soft lights and music passionate nights filled with romance? Is it tried and true solid as a stone, does it leaving you feeling empty when it has left you all alone? Does love make you swoon and leave your mind to ponder, does it fill your heart with joy or make it feel asunder? Love can be sweet bliss a broken heart is taint, I might not know what love is but I sure know what it ain't! < !signature--> On the wings of words our spirits fly, and our souls are free. Donna Smith [This message has been edited by Gentle Spirit (edited 01-13-2001).] |
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Charisma![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
you named it all, and love contains so many more, ....enjoyed reading it. ((hugs)) Charisma |
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Sven![]() ![]()
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
I've asked myself this for a long time. . . thanks for the answers. . . Loved the ending. . . ![]() ------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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DYME Member
since 2000-07-29
Posts 104Texas |
BEAUTIFUL. STRAIGHT AND TO THE POINT. YOU REALLY DO KNOW WHAT LOVE AIN'T!! LOVED IT. SMOOCHES!! DYME NO WEAPON FORMED AGAINST ME SHALL PROSPER... ISAIAH 54:17 |
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BloomingRose Member Elite
since 2000-08-09
Posts 3092Florida |
I think it's all these and more. Great poem! Deb |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Wonderful read from you. I really like you taking on trying to define love and you have done a marvelous job in doing so. There is so much to love that it could never all be penned nor even expressed but you have made a great start. |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
Definitely all those things, my friend, and it certainly helps to know what it "ain't"! jwesley |
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Poeminister Senior Member
since 2000-02-26
Posts 1862Regina SK; Canada |
Wonderful write...enjoyed the read. Poeminister |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
Love is many things ![]() This piece you have penned well, enjoyed Tracie~ Love is the life of the soul... It is the harmony of the universe |
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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida |
love is so many things..and in so many different ways.. ![]() the good the bad and the ugly of it..its worth it.. ![]() all the same..we ask dont we...! nice write.. hugs, g "a love declared for days to come, is as good as none" -tracy chapman |
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Lady Lightning Member
since 2000-12-04
Posts 422Kentucky |
You said it so well, these things and so much more it is... ![]() The way to love anything is to realize it might be lost. author unknown |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
GS, this poem brought out the smiles tonite... Such a sweet write and I thank you *~coco~* |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Oh I wish I had more time to be here than what I do. You have all been so kind in your replies to my words and I am so very grateful. I was sitting one day pondering all of the things that love is, and the twist to the ending came when I realized that none of us never really KNOW what love is, but we all have an idea of what it "ain't" Thanks all so much and peace my friends. {HUGS) On the wings of words our spirits fly, and our souls are free. Donna Smith |
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vandana![]()
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoy the read ![]() |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Thanks much Vandana. ![]() On the wings of words our spirits fly, and our souls are free. Donna Smith |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Gentle Spirit, you're right! I too know what it ain't. Thought provoking write. write on Kethry Those of us who refuse to risk and grow get swallowed up by life. Patty Hansen. |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Thanks Kethry, I appreciate the visit. *s* On the wings of words our spirits fly, and our souls are free. Donna Smith |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
I might not know what love is but I sure know what it ain't! It certainly helps to know what it aint! enjoyed very much ![]() Maree I need a lullaby a kiss goodnight Angel sweet love of my life Oh, I need this ~Natalie Merchant~ |
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