Open Poetry #12 |
Shadow Dancing |
Lady In White
since 2001-02-12
Posts 2799USA |
Shadow Dancing shadow boxing tap dancing shadow dancing slow romancing in the mind can only be done if you're kind kind of mind one of a kind kind of shadow dancing mind the kind of shadow dancing done step step to step step fro step side side step one of a kind if you've the mind in my mind I find you kind to shadow dance with me making a we of us you're not here step step forth step step back just a shadow a body you lack the music plays slow and low you're sleeping overhead you've never understood the dread I have in losing the dance slow romance slowed by chance? circumstance? happenstance? just knowing that it did lifts the lid on questions asked but thoughts are masked taken to task can't relax shadow dancing kind in mind moving slow turn and twirl thoughts to swirl dip and curl and bend and wend away my thoughts chance was bought with life of line thought of mind mind in kind once ten cents a dance slow romance sixty years ago taking it slow now shadow dancing is the way to go slow romance take a chance God if I could go back to ten cents a dance real romance my kind of mind shadow dancing one more time |
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Elizabeth
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Member Ascendant
since 1999-06-07
Posts 6871Minnesota |
These are beautiful thoughts. Well done. |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Wow.........10 cents a dance eh? This is great......I enjoyed this very much..... SEA |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
I'll pay a dime but I want to dance in three quarter time!! Your words dance..... |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
this sends my mind on several trips from my memories...experiences experienced vicariously. |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Wonderful title and wonderful render...loved the whole idea it spoke over time to the present....ethome The poet is like a cocoon; in him the caterpillar of the past finds rest, and from him the butterfly of the future emerges. |
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Lady In White
since 2001-02-12
Posts 2799USA |
Thank you all so very much! |
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Angel4aKing Senior Member
since 2006-09-27
Posts 1372USA |
Seems I found another favorite poet on pip!!!! just applauding the fine dancing. ~~~kingsangel~~~ |
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