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The power |
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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace 
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The power I do not dare take the chance to feel the touch of lovers dance inside, I have an ache within do not need another to begin disappointments have a way creep in your heart there to stay for now do not contend in hope again to fall on slippery slope so many things can you arrange beat of heart you can not change for now I know who holds the key to own that power is only me |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Where ya been ladyslick? I'm gonna keep this one---might even write it down five hundred times... sigh of sighs...lonely sometimes, tho ain't it? Well done. |
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ATelamon Member
since 2001-02-06
Posts 328Purgatory, Last Staircase, Up |
Self shields can save us sometimes in pushing away the night sometimes they block the sun sometimes... well said says he with a pen lol AT "Time is merely change. It neither enslaves nor determines us. It is instead our opportunity for self-definition" |
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DonFurr Member
since 2001-01-01
Posts 172Monticello IN |
A pleasure to see you gaining Dear Lady |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
A true thought provoking well thought write...very good, much enjoyed! The poet is like a cocoon; in him the caterpillar of the past finds rest, and from him the butterfly of the future emerges. |
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bslicker 
since 2000-12-04
Posts 2321state of mind |
Great write!!!!!! One only hopes that the key to the power opens the right locks.  jsom |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
indeed, the power is within us. . . just be sure to use it for good. . .  wonderful helen. . . -------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Cerenity Member Elite
since 2000-02-16
Posts 2637Escondido-California |
Hi SlickLady, I admire your inner strength shown in this piece, I do hope one day though the light of love will once again brighten up your heart, wonderful reading here. Love, Cerenity "God doesn't have to be reminded that we exist. We have to be reminded that He exist!" (Writer Unknown) |
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