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Open Poetry #12

Breakfast

Snow

Senior Member

since 2000-10-16

Posts 1170
desert flower looking for rain

0 posted 2001-02-16 03:28 AM

Breakfast

I watched
as he slide
the fork
under the
blueberries
and passed
them between
his lips

gooey
drips
of sauce
fall
back on to
the waffle
where
whipped
cream turned
purple

and the
shivers up
my back
make me
blush
while my
lips curl
in a silent
desire
to trade
places

check!

[This message has been edited by Snow (edited 02-16-2001).]

Dee
Member Elite

since 2000-08-19

Posts 2330
Queensland, Australia

1 posted 2001-02-16 03:43 AM

Interesting way of looking at breakfast, Snow! I really liked it, put a smile on my face.
Dee

I wish you every happiness and pray you'll always have the best of the good things in life. a brand

nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

2 posted 2001-02-16 05:21 AM

ahhhhhhhhhh...I am loving your little escapades of thought..

~softsmiles

~Wynter

"The worst prison would be a closed heart".
...Pope John Paul II

ethome
Member Patricius

since 2000-05-14

Posts 11858
New Brunswick Canada

3 posted 2001-02-16 05:45 AM

This is a nice look at things I enjoyed the read!

The poet is like a cocoon; in him the caterpillar of the past finds rest, and from him the butterfly of the future emerges.

Poeminister
Senior Member

since 2000-02-26

Posts 1862
Regina SK; Canada

4 posted 2001-02-16 04:50 PM

Excellent, sounds delicious.

Poeminister

kaile

Member Ascendant

since 2000-02-06

Posts 5146
singapore

5 posted 2001-02-18 10:23 PM

i will never look at waffles the same way again

enjoyed the read

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