Open Poetry #12 |
The Lover |
catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Lover of all times and places, Lover of violent crimson passion and bittersweet words, Lover of liquified chocolate heated to boiling, Lover of magnificent insincerity and dreams of golden sands, Lover of freedoms call and destiny's yearning, Lover of all women.. Let me touch you once more to hold within my arms the illusion of our finest hours. And while I hear you call to me my arms remain empty though my heart bursts; Your ruthlessly seductive voice wraps me in desire. My lover of blackened ice and blue-red fire.. Dream as if you'll live forever; Live as if you'll die today. — James Dean |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
darn Sandra..this one got to me.....and I promised myself a non-tearful day..*s hugging you ~Wynter "The worst prison would be a closed heart". ...Pope John Paul II |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
wow Sandra. . . totally full of passion and longing. . . superb. . . ----------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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SpitFire Member Elite
since 2000-04-19
Posts 2396 |
~LADY!!!! Where have you and these words been hiding? This is awesome,... "My lover of blackened ice and blue-red fire..", the whole thing really. Missed you and your work. *Peace Friend. |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Some great writing bleeding through this yearning! |
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athena4 Senior Member
since 2000-12-10
Posts 622 |
Catalina, Such intense emotions from an intense heart. This was beautiful... Love, Elise |
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Mendy Junior Member
since 2000-11-11
Posts 34 |
Sandra I often wonder why so many poems seem to beone sided in their consideration of love - If we cannot or donot love inspite of or because of fault this wlove is fiction - for me you capture loves completeness the only thing left is to find it Love the poem Mendy if it is true that the world talks toomuch then let us all keep quiet and hear the eloquence of silence - Richard Ntiru |
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A Whisper's Caress Senior Member
since 2000-11-03
Posts 791on the horizon of a fairytale |
WOW, this is soo good. Loved every word. May your dreams always dance to the rhythm of a lover's heartbeat... |
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insect Senior Member
since 2000-04-22
Posts 1014 |
Great piece Flaming and powerful! Love it |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
WOW!!!!!!!!!!! That one really grabs you and makes you listen. What a wonderful write from you my friend. You have to feel a might better just from getting some of that out. Loved the imagery in this one even if they did come with pain attached and the cadence was great. Well done. |
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