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Meadow Music |
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Dr.Moose1 Member Elite
since 1999-09-05
Posts 3448Bewilderment , USA |
As darkling hand of night recedes there stands an army in the mist and most attentively these reeds await the words that once had kissed The willows weep the alders sigh above the moist and fertile ground while chic-a-dees on cat-tail spires sit motion-less without a sound No creatures sound out to their mates no voice of Nature's heard at all this eerie silence permeates until a voice is heard to call Awakening long dormant glen with serenades for which it's yearned and life resumes it's pace again for " meadow music " has returned [This message has been edited by Dr.Moose1 (edited 02-16-2001).] |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
DrMoose~ Oh what lovely sounds await us on the break of dawn. This is replete with the imagery of anticipation. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
await the words that once had kissed yes...me too..I loved that line but also love your complete thoughts this morning...*s ~Wynter "The worst prison would be a closed heart". ...Pope John Paul II |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
This is lovely... it doesn't just create music, it paints a picture I want to step through. *S* Great poem! |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
Music...oooohh this is just a symphony...as much as I (lol) dislike early mornings I love getting up just for this very reason...this just makes me ache for spring |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Gorgeous...doc, I am indeed a "fan"...a keeper for my library! |
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Dr.Moose1 Member Elite
since 1999-09-05
Posts 3448Bewilderment , USA |
Marge, You were quite instrumental in this piece .Thanks. Doc Nakd, Glad to get you up and going , is that de-caff or regular ? I'm kinda a full flavor type myself , poetry lite ? I don't think so. Thanks. Doc suthern , Thank you , I brought out my best brushes to paint this for one who was away but has returned . Doc Paula, Yes , I too , seem always to be waiting , my life on hold , knowing that completion is just a word away ! But then again , I'm nuts ! serenity, Can you spare some ? Keepers as in fish , are as large as one would wish , but fools as general rules , are often found in schools.I forgot who said that , maybe it was me . Thanks , Doc |
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Meadowmuse Member Elite
since 1999-12-27
Posts 3263 |
Few poems feel this good. I love it. (Thank you) (o: Claire Could a greater miracle take place than for us to look through each other's eyes for an instant?......Henry David Thoreau |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Doc--You capture grace and beauty with your words. |
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Dr.Moose1 Member Elite
since 1999-09-05
Posts 3448Bewilderment , USA |
Claire , Thanks for being you and stopping by .Your words are an inspiration . Someday I'll figure this all out , 'till then I'll just keep on writing . Doc Martie , Thank you . Your comments are always appreciated . Even though I don't reply as often as I should , I'd like you to know that yours' is a rather unique talent , that it has been my pleasure to enjoy on this site . Doc [This message has been edited by Dr.Moose1 (edited 02-16-2001).] |
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Craig Member
since 1999-06-10
Posts 444 |
This reply is just a word to thank you for the chance to read such a fine poem, I’ve read it several times and it gets better on each occasion. Thanks again for the chance to read and reply Yes, I admit your general rule. That every poet is a fool: But I myself may serve to show it. That every fool is not a poet. |
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