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Our Vows to Love
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Our Vows to Love |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Serenity gained from vows to love Drawn together in celebration Young in spirit we began Our lives of collaboration Will our love survive to that golden time will your hand still reach out to find me will we still note each glance, each touch that guides us to our eternity Or will we blink and loose the sight of what was planned as love’s design will we turn and walk away from the world that is yours and mine Perhaps the future is best unknown each moment seen as a cherished token that combined with our love will ever be a bond that remains unbroken. When does a memory become an heirloom to be passed down from heart to soul when all the beautiful tomorrows become the yesterdays that make us whole [This message has been edited by Poet deVine (edited 02-13-2001).] |
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Severn Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704 |
Awwwwwww... Sharon, this is just lovely...I love that last line and the truth of it..  K...and I have found that a lifetime can be lived in one moment... T.G.M. |
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WhiteKnight Member
since 2001-01-01
Posts 83NY |
"When does a memory become an heirloom to be passed down from heart to soul when all the beautiful tomorrows become the yesterdays that make us whole" Simply beautiful. WhiteKnight |
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walker Member Elite
since 2001-02-11
Posts 2240Florida |
We have to live the moment because memories can drift away with passing time, even those memories of passion. Nice job! |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
All beauty and truth here, s. And the last verse? the only answer that I have is that we create our own heirlooms---we decide. "you never know when you're makin' a memory, they will wish they were here together again, someday..."---ricki lee jones |
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Alwye
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Member Elite
since 1999-06-16
Posts 3850In the space between moments |
Indeed, sometimes the future is best unknown....a lovely valentine poem my friend, your talent never ceases to amaze me!  *Krista Knutson* I'm a slow dying flower In a frost-killing hour The sweet turning sour and untouchable... -Natalie Merchant |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
Beautiful verse and advice  Happy Valentine's Day to you! Take care, Melissa~ |
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laryalee Member
since 2000-06-19
Posts 352Alberta, Canada |
Truly enjoyed this - so wisely and lovingly crafted! Lary |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
Lovely, Sharon, just lovely. "I walked beside the evening sea and dreamed a dream that could not be." George William Curtis |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
...A wonderful poem - with a perfect finale..  |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Thank you all, I appreciate your kind words. This was written for a young couple for their wedding. |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Absolutely lovely, PDV... I hope they appreciate this incredible gift. *S* |
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Craig Member
since 1999-06-10
Posts 444 |
I see you’re getting a reputation for writing good poetry and after this I can see why. Thanks for the chance to read and reply Yes, I admit your general rule. That every poet is a fool: But I myself may serve to show it. That every fool is not a poet. |
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