Prismed in Tomorrow...inspired by serenity

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nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

0 posted 2001-02-15 05:46 AM

inspired by Serenity's "Kaleidoscope"

Prismed in Tomorrow

Thoughts are howling like the wind
in wonderment today.
Yet warm, the breezes tend to blow
with promise on it's way.
Hears the whispers, softly cried,
feels the message wrought.
Lies here in the openness
arrest in nakedthought.
With eyes half closed, the days seem dark
'til moonbeams streak within.
Inner child awaits, in calm
the phasing to begin.
Changes soon, a growing need,
a discipline in being.
Eyes begin to open full,
a kaleidoscope of seeing.
A twist of this, a turn towards right,
shapes of things to come.
A backwards twist, will lock the soul
to pasts that made one numb.
To share in colours, filled with strength
those diamonds, curves and blends,
need only try another turn
to heal, to feel on mend.
If that one doesn't work the will,
others, choiced will find.
A collection of them rests on shelves,
gathering dust of mind.
Brass that shines like pennies, new
and inlaid wooden, pieced,
coloured prisms, skylight viewed,
these eyes implore their feast.
To settle back, relax this day
the silence, beauty reigns.
No myst in eyes to block the sight,
to future, of lessened pains.

~Wynter

"The worst prison would be a closed heart".
...Pope John Paul II

[This message has been edited by nakdthoughts (edited 02-15-2001).]

Irish Rose
Member Patricius

since 2000-04-06

Posts 10263

1 posted 2001-02-15 06:32 AM

this is powerful imagery, Wynter.

"When red-haired girls scamper like roses over the rain-green grass,
and the sun drips honey."
Laurie Lee

nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

2 posted 2001-02-15 08:08 AM

I am responding only after one reply this morning...because if I do like I did in the past few days..I have lost all contact with those who are on here at the same time as I... thank you Kathleen huggzz * besides I don't get tons of replies, I could wait a week to get 5 sometimes (if I am lucky *lol)

~Wynter/Moonchild

"The worst prison would be a closed heart".
...Pope John Paul II

[This message has been edited by nakdthoughts (edited 02-15-2001).]

serenity blaze
Member Empyrean

since 2000-02-02

Posts 27738

3 posted 2001-02-15 09:12 AM

Thank you for the lovely compliments too...
and I love the line about the backward turn.
It's something I too am being very stubborn about these days...I love this, winter...and sometimes, we've just got to stand our ground. Many HUGS, dear friend. You're doing alright!

Poeminister
Senior Member

since 2000-02-26

Posts 1862
Regina SK; Canada

4 posted 2001-02-16 11:53 PM

nakdthoughts--Love the title, and this piece holds wonderful thoughts and images. Nicely done.

Poeminister

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