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Poeminister
Senior Member

since 2000-02-26

Posts 1862
Regina SK; Canada

0 posted 2001-02-15 02:35 AM

Outdoors we make love
as stars look down from above
we entertain them

Nate Dogg
Senior Member

since 1999-11-15

Posts 1658
Georgia, Fulton

1 posted 2001-02-15 02:40 AM

Great piece, Poetminister!

Nathan

Poeminister
Senior Member

since 2000-02-26

Posts 1862
Regina SK; Canada

2 posted 2001-02-15 12:02 PM

Thank you Nate Dogg.

Dawn Eclipse
Senior Member

since 2000-01-31

Posts 637
The Horsehead Nebula

3 posted 2001-02-15 05:26 PM

Just a few words, but lots of meaning. nicely done.

"Forget regret, or life is yours to miss. No other course, no other way... No day but today"
~Broadway Musical RENT~

*Cassandra Roseen*

ethome
Member Patricius

since 2000-05-14

Posts 11858
New Brunswick Canada

4 posted 2001-02-15 05:30 PM

That is so simple but so absolutely beautiful!!

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

5 posted 2001-02-15 05:35 PM

Ah, no wonder they wink!

A Whisper's Caress
Senior Member

since 2000-11-03

Posts 791
on the horizon of a fairytale

6 posted 2001-02-15 06:32 PM

and those stars shine so brightly...
now we know why... beautiful, as always

May your dreams always dance to the rhythm of a lover's heartbeat...

ATelamon
Member

since 2001-02-06

Posts 328
Purgatory, Last Staircase, Up

7 posted 2001-02-15 06:34 PM

stars above glowing
fill the eye in passion
shows inside whats real

Nicely done for sure
excellent

"Time is merely change. It neither enslaves nor determines us. It is instead our opportunity for self-definition"

Corinne
Member Ascendant

since 1999-10-28

Posts 5167
state of confusion

8 posted 2001-02-15 08:58 PM

Sweet, says it all!

Corinne

Acies

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Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-07

Posts 7665
Twilight Zone

9 posted 2001-02-15 09:01 PM

hmmmmm.....very interesting
beautiful way of putting it

So long as men can breathe or eyes can see,
So long lives this, and this give life to thee." W.S.

VAS
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-16

Posts 7450
Oregon

10 posted 2001-02-15 09:03 PM

heh=heh=heh entertaining the stars, eh

any high rises around you?

Celeste
Senior Member

since 2000-11-11

Posts 597

11 posted 2001-02-15 09:04 PM

simpily beautiful......*soft sigh*

To capture and live a moment is truly living

Meadowmuse
Member Elite

since 1999-12-27

Posts 3263

12 posted 2001-02-15 09:24 PM

K, I agree. Lovely.

C.

Could a greater miracle take place than for us to look through each other's eyes for an instant?......Henry David Thoreau

kaile

Member Ascendant

since 2000-02-06

Posts 5146
singapore

13 posted 2001-02-16 04:45 AM

smiles across the miles

nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

14 posted 2001-02-16 05:09 AM

love it!!

~Wynter

"The worst prison would be a closed heart".
...Pope John Paul II

Honeybee
Member Ascendant

since 1999-12-26

Posts 5372
Ontario, CANADA

15 posted 2001-02-16 10:49 AM

Oooooh, I like this!

Take care,
Melissa~

SEA

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Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

16 posted 2001-02-17 08:26 PM

Yes.......definately........love this! Very hot........

SEA

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