Open Poetry #12 |
Tireless and Soulful (by Snow and Robert Joseph) |
Snow
since 2000-10-16
Posts 1170desert flower looking for rain |
after spending 3 incredibly romantic days and nights with my fiance, my forever valentine *sigh* we penned this. I adore you, Robert.. always,Neve Tireless and Soulful Tell me how to sleep now that I've known the spill of your breast beneath me Only if you could tell me how to turn a pillow into your chest and the ticking of a clock into the sound of your breathing Where do I find lips to drain me of breath knowing yours dawn till dusk and beyond Where are the eyes that spoke to my heart, the lips that made me tremble and the hands .... whose fingers entwined with mine, while the need of two sealed our future, as one How do I command this tireless wanting calling me to your door your essence having stained my tongue It's this soulful wanting that will soon remove the highway of tears and replace it with our garden of dreams, fulfilled. Show me Love ~ close your eyes reach within me ~ forever embraced still and calm my need ~ as though it were my own yet summon me ever more ~ a circle of gold, the color of you forever as one, unbound...all the way Snow&Robert 2/13/01 [This message has been edited by Snow (edited 02-14-2001).] |
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inot2B Member Elite
since 2000-09-18
Posts 2205Arkansas |
Wow, this has the deep beauty of love. The two of you have done a very stimulating job. |
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Robert Joseph Member
since 2000-10-07
Posts 491South Carolina |
Thanks Inot2B, I'm glad you enjoyed this piece. And, thank you, Neve for sharing in it with me. Robert Joseph |
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Nate Dogg Senior Member
since 1999-11-15
Posts 1658Georgia, Fulton |
Very good writing you two.....ahh, I just love it when two poets collaborate....I just wish we would do it more like, wouldn't you want to see poets like me, Liz, Mark, Michael, or Sy collaborate.....that would be heavenly(snaps back to earth).....oh yeah, I loved this piece!(smiles) Nathan |
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Robert Joseph Member
since 2000-10-07
Posts 491South Carolina |
Thanks Nathan, we do appreciate your thoughtful reply. Snow&Robert |
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Celeste Senior Member
since 2000-11-11
Posts 597 |
Completely beautiful. Brought tears to my eyes! So happy for you both. To capture and live a moment is truly living |
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