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walker
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since 2001-02-11

Posts 2240
Florida

0 posted 2001-02-12 02:33 PM

Timing is everything.
Regardless who hopes,
for more time and less
stressors, you'll eventually
succumb to a world in which time
its glory holds. Don't wait a
phone call it will eventually ring.
Don't wait for the snow because
winter will fall.
Timing is everything,
remember my prose.
Don't wait for nothing
because it too will eventually come.

Nate Dogg
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since 1999-11-15

Posts 1658
Georgia, Fulton

1 posted 2001-02-12 02:55 PM

great advice, great piece!

Nathan

Agust P
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since 2000-12-29

Posts 157

2 posted 2001-02-12 03:12 PM

I liked this one, thanks, AP

LoveBug

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since 2000-01-08

Posts 4697

3 posted 2001-02-12 09:51 PM

Beautiful thoughts in a beautiful piece! This is one challenge we should all take. Thanks for sharing.

"Men judge generally more by the eye than by the hand, for everyone can see and few can feel."-Machiavelli

redwriter1
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since 1999-07-22

Posts 480
Franklin, TN

4 posted 2001-02-13 12:36 PM

Hurry Up! But don't wait! (grin)

Wish i could capture this theme in a song.

i.e.: If you aim at nothing.. you'll probably hit it.

i.e: reach for the moon, even if you don't get it, at least you'll be among the stars.

i.e.:  I hope you still feel small when you stand beside the ocean..<<< what a great line!!
I'm looking for the same thing you are my friend....... inspirational.... "stuff" that I feel........ but the words escape as I stop to watch a flock of birds dotting the sky... like polka dots on cotton.

as I.... see a huge ball of orange color so huge in the morning sky, i think i can reach out and touch it.. (do they make crayola's in that color?)

Do others see what I see?? Do they notice?

and who invented "burnt sienna" anyway??

The moments pass by...... I try to catch and hold them, but it's a cruel trick of time....

when you "look" for moments.. you'll never see them.  It's when you are living "in" the moment, that's you are allowed to appreciate the gifts while they are there.

I guess a good challenge poem would be..

"I look, but do i see?"
"I hear, but do i listen?"

and the most famous phrase of all that echos thru my life..... from the Wizard of Oz.

"You are not judged by how much YOU love. but by how much you are loved by OTHERS".

(sigh). anyone want to take this challenge?

Kay-lynn
**A dream is a wish your heart makes :)

Cerenity
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since 2000-02-16

Posts 2637
Escondido-California

5 posted 2001-02-14 11:56 AM

Hi Walker,

I like this one, very thought provoking, very nicely done, thank you very much enjoyed.

Love, Cerenity

"God doesn't have to be reminded that we exist.
We have to be reminded that He exist!"

(Writer Unknown)

kaile

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since 2000-02-06

Posts 5146
singapore

6 posted 2001-02-16 08:38 AM

liked the last two lines particularly...i am a sucker for great soundbites...

thanx for the read

nakdthoughts
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since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

7 posted 2001-02-16 11:23 AM

Don't wait for nothing
because it too will eventually come.

so right are you...*s

~Wynter...now if only I could take some of that advice...

"The worst prison would be a closed heart".
...Pope John Paul II

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