Open Poetry #12 |
I might be dangerous (repost in honor of the day) |
jellybeans Member Elite
since 2000-10-13
Posts 2298 |
ok, so I wasn't going to be here today, and the 'day' I am talking about is not Valentines Day, its because I got stopped this morning...AND didn't get a ticket *sly grin*) I might be dangerous the road was long and deserted when in the rearview sirens roar lights blink and she cursed beneath her breath until she saw his face entranced was she by his all business no time for play license and registration please her eyes twinkled she grabbed her fantasy quick before he realized he was to be the costar and she asked don't I look dangerous to you? taken aback more by what her eyes were voicing than by her question his mind blanked his reply at first then somehow coming up with an excuse me? but from deep inside his wanting an attentive salute interpreted the twinkle before she needed to clarify and so he looked down she asked again don't you think I look dangerous? I would search me if I were you... eyes locked in silent conversation questions and answers traveling in split second time the twinkle in her eyes and the curve of her take me to your mouth and kiss me lips spoke to him so loudly that reason could no longer be heard and he almost didn't recognize the voice that said maybe you should step out of the car miss and spread them wide she too quickly for him to change his mind obliged I might be dangerous she laughed again over her shoulder you should be thorough with your search, that is and she arched her firm body into the smoothness into the hardness of his search she turned to face her fantasy... and what he gave she took [This message has been edited by jellybeans (edited 02-14-2001).] |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Did you say dangerous or just plain ole forthright??? Makes one think about changing careers. Nice little story filled with much imagination. (if it wasn't imagination...I don't want to know..LOL) Seriously....I enjoyed the read much and you capture the reader rather quickly in this piece and hold them to the end effortlessly. |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
And you say you got out of a ticket just this morning? *G* Pray tell, just how big is the grin on your face? LOL This is wonderful... and wicked... and whew (fanning flushed face)! *G* |
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jellybeans Member Elite
since 2000-10-13
Posts 2298 |
Mark.....lolol...no....*putting hands in the air* Really! it was just imagination, I think I even blushed to think if it wasn't ...thanks for your comments suthern, you stop that fanning lol you are creating quite a breeze.....lolol....and he was just in a forgiving mood...be it valentines day and all...I really didn't have to cross my legs, wink, or flirt a bit...... rofg j/k I promise..... |
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