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Let's Get Mushy One MORE Time !
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Let's Get Mushy One MORE Time ! |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores 
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Let's Get Mushy One MORE Time ! An Overdose Of Valentine ~Sweetness~ ~Marge Tindal~ Honey, do you love me ? Darling, do you care ? Sugar, I just yearn for you. Baby, do we dare? Sweetheart, do you love me ? Lovey, do you hear? Snookums, can you stand ... ~Sweet Nothings~ in your ear ? Babe, I hear you calling. Cupcake, here I am. Angel, I have fallen ... God, I love this man ! You'd be my Valentine, if I had not hesitated ... This overdose of sweet stuff has got me nauseated ! Sugarplum, honeybear, I want to be your Valentine. If you don't get really sick on this little rhyme ! *Pass the Pepto Bismol ! A regurgitated piece from Open #5 !  ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Marge, This is so sweet it nearly made me sick. pass the Pepto Bismal(or as we would say alka seltza) indeed Write on Kethry Those of us who refuse to risk and grow get swallowed up by life. Patty Hansen. |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Margie girl, And I thought it was an attempt to assassinate me. Being that it's called Let's Get Mushy, I was just going to throw my hands up and say I'm sorry. I'm sorry anyway, it doesn't hurt to say it before I commit any faux pas. I love it dear heart, even if it made me slightly nauseous, okay not slightly, very! Wonderful love, and if you're going to get me, can I choose you to speak the eulogy, I just know you'd do a good job. Love it Take care love as always Mushy  Take back the hope you gave,- I claim Only a memory of the same Robert Browning [This message has been edited by Marsha (edited 02-14-2001).] |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Whew...I'm in a sugar overdose here! Cute!! |
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2dalimit Member Elite
since 2000-02-08
Posts 2228Mississippi coast |
My wife says I call her these names because I can't remember her real name. Sickeeee, but sweet. Melton |
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TerryW Senior Member
since 2000-03-23
Posts 779Louisville, Mississippi, USA |
Marge~ Hello, my dear, sweet friend! I have missed you! I have missed your lovely poetry, too! Thank you for bringing back this one, my friend. It is lovely! I needed the good smile that this one brought to my heart today! Happy Valentine's Day to you, dear! Love Ya~ ~you reached inside, you touched my heart, and I am all the better for it~ Terry A. Woodson, Jr. |
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Wilfred Yeats Member Elite
since 2000-08-04
Posts 2704Wilmington, Delaware |
'Honey bun', 'sugar snookums', 'sweety cakes' any of these or my favorite: 'love' (I keep it simple) no diabetic here - just don't call me late for dinner this tickled me |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
Ah, this poem indeed filled me with much sweetness of Valentines Day as I read it, I felt really lovesick after I read this. I shouldn't drink that much Pepto Bismol! (giggles) Such a novel, excellent poem! You have such a beautiful heart, my friend, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you this lovely Valentines Day! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Kethry~ EXACTLY ... !  Marsha~ LOL @ you ! PoetdeVine~ Thanks ! 2DaLimit~ LOL ! Now those are grounds for CHOCOLATE ! TerryW~ Hello, love. I've missed you too. Seeing you here is the nicest Valentine I've received today ! *Hugs* Wilfred~ Well, love ... Glad to tickle you ... somehow I think you'd enjoy that !  Noah~ Tee-Hee ! I love sharing the sweets ! ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Robert Joseph Member
since 2000-10-07
Posts 491South Carolina |
Marge, I believe you win the prize...gooey sweet for sure! Laughing! Robert Joseph |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
RJ~ LOL ! Thank you ... and it'd be my luck ... I'd win something like a box of chocolates ! Ummm ! Could we make that dark chocolate with almonds ? ! ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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snowpants Member Elite
since 2000-09-16
Posts 2061KS |
Ugggghhh....TOO much sugar...never thought I'd say that!! Very cute (and nauseating) write, Marge!  sp  everytime I close my eyes, I see your face, I taste you on my lips... every night I fantasize that I can feel you on my fingertips... |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
This is SO sweet, my little gootsy-wootsy teddy bear!! I got so gosh darned teary-eyed reading it my heart just flip-flopped all over the room....thank you, sugar plum |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
um.....pink? .... not my color....but a good laugh.... |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Oh, geesh! *G* I'm so glad I didn't read this yesterday... I would have hated to ruin the taste of fine chocolates with a pepto chaser! LOL. Thanks for the grins! *S* |
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kayjay Member Elite
since 2002-06-24
Posts 2015Oregon |
Dear friendly Marge, you've said it all Such a couple would have a ball. They'd whoop it up and just get randy These words go down like cotton candy. Just as sweet as all get out. They kinda make me laugh and shout. Is this the way I should have talked To my ex-wife when she squawked? I fear to use these terms endearing, I'd be near an altar, I'd be fearing. Thanks for sharing this with me on my "Women don't love "Sweet" post and thanks for the nice comments. Ken Through rubble and trouble and dark of night |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Ken~ Thanks for the little 'sweet nuttins' verse~ Very clever~ Enjoyed the giggles with you~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*When the heart grieves over what it has lost, |
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