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Falling Into You
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Falling Into You |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia 
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lost to your eyes your lips  My desire a touch a glance sure romance fiery passion ignites flames around us as I fall into you Your kiss to me a promise your promise A wish and hope of splendour as stars cloud my vision I see only you I'm lost in you The dizzying heights of rapture spiralling out of control I'm falling into you Self lost from me I disappear to be found in you Those of us who refuse to risk and grow get swallowed up by life. Patty Hansen. |
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Ladycat 
since 1999-07-05
Posts 782At the edge and a doorway,TX |
Ohhhhh.. This piece is another beautiful feeling piece. I know what you mean. This a piece that I would love to share with my boyfriend this Valentine's Day. It shows so much what it is really like to be in love. Love, Lady Live in my world just once and you'll find yourself enraptured. |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Kethry dear heart, this is utterly truly wonderful, and this is just one of the reasons I miss your words. You lift me up where the stars are. I adore it, and it is pure you. It has the fluidity of silk, the rhythm of the heart. Fabulous work and please love put in more, you know I need the good stuff.  Take care love as always Slushy Take back the hope you gave,- I claim Only a memory of the same Robert Browning |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
The dizzying heights of rapture spiralling out of control I'm falling into you Self lost from me I disappear to be found in you ======================= hey you....where you been girlie  oh...I know...falling and doing so quite poetically very cool write Keth In the evening when you see my eyes Looking back at you no disguise Im not sure who you think youll see Im just hoping youll still know that its me |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
My oh my........now we know where you been hiding don't we. What a treat to read and on this special day no less. Great write and lovely thoughts. Loved the flow in this one much. |
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doreen peri Member Elite
since 1999-05-25
Posts 3812Virginia |
it's a lovely poem, kethry.... and i LOVE the title... lol... matter of fact, i wrote the same title last week /pip/Forum44/HTML/001695.html *grin.... well, as we say in advertising, it's hard to think of anything new...or was that ecclesiastes..."there's nothing new under the sun"? damn!! or something, but you did a great job with this title... are we making this a challenge title? or... aw geez... what am i trying to say? enjoyed your poem very much, *sigh*... liked the title a lot, too... ROFL.... happy Valentines [This message has been edited by doreen peri (edited 02-14-2001).] |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
To fall and know you'll be caught... to be lost and know you'll be found... Trust is definitely the foundation for love. *S* This is beautiful, Kethry. |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
This is so very good Keth! I like the graphics and everything...good show!! |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
If you ask me doreen. . . you both may have been listening to Celine Dion. . . wonderful Kethry. . . this is excellent. . . ------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(sigh) Such beautiful images and love in here! (sigh) Your love is very lucky indeed to share a beautiful heart such as yours! Beautiful romantic poem, my friend, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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doreen peri Member Elite
since 1999-05-25
Posts 3812Virginia |
(don't listen celine dion... who IS that? lol... no seriously, i know who she is, but it's not one of my usual styles of music to peruse).... but i DO think, kethry and i might be on the same wavelength... you never know, y'know? it's hard to tell, looking through a blue glowing screen at text... but... i CAN say this... kethry... i will repeat... enjoyed your poem *grin |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Keth, I think this one is better than great. You combine the perfect words with the perfect sentiment.....a great one for Valentine's Day |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Kethry....look at you! and what you Do!....well done little one.... |
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KokoStewartKoomoa Senior Member
since 2000-12-04
Posts 580Waikiki, Hawaii |
Very locely poem and a muse with emotions aglowing.thanks for the great read! Passion,imagination and intellect running together... Poetry in motion~~~ Aloha with warmest regards, Koko |
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