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Secret Whisper
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since 2001-01-25

Posts 298
Through the Looking Glass

0 posted 2001-02-13 07:34 PM

This crushing pain of reality,
So easily destroying hope.
Defaming any gladness,
In Hell's aberrant joke.

Straining the strings of serenity,
Bludgeoning the battered soul.
Laying waste the tattered battlements,
Smiting the joys of old.

So alone and so surrounded.
Sanctioned pangs of strife.
Consuming doubts of envy.
In my repugnant days of life.

~~~~For my sister Anne... I love you so dearly and will miss you more than you will ever know. With any joy in life comes a consuming sorrow for how much I love you, and yet must be seperated from you. Without you I am no one...~~~~

"Close your eyes, and you'll see. Cover your ears, and you'll hear."

Poet deVine

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Member Seraphic

since 1999-05-26

Posts 22612
Hurricane Alley

1 posted 2001-02-13 08:10 PM

Hauntingly beautiful. You are in my thoughts.

Lone Wolf
Member Ascendant

since 2000-03-16

Posts 5842
Lansing, MI USA

2 posted 2001-02-13 08:26 PM

Powerful emotions here. Very well written.

LW

Poetry should surprise by fine excess...it should strike the reader as a wording of his own highest thoughts and appear almost a remembrance. -J.Keats

snowpants
Member Elite

since 2000-09-16

Posts 2061
KS

3 posted 2001-02-13 08:54 PM

Very powerful write, Secret Whisper. You've penned these emotions quite well...

sp

everytime I close my eyes, I see your face, I taste you on my lips...
every night I fantasize that I can feel you on my fingertips...

Maverick Wolf
Member

since 1999-11-13

Posts 94
Scandia, MN

4 posted 2001-03-12 11:19 PM

You are wonderful. Wonderful write.

Yesterday's history, tomorrow's a mystery, and today is a gift. That's why they call it the present.

Honeybee
Member Ascendant

since 1999-12-26

Posts 5372
Ontario, CANADA

5 posted 2001-03-12 11:36 PM

Sadly beautiful and intense, well expressed

Take care,
Melissa~

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

6 posted 2001-03-13 05:07 AM

You have expressed your feelings and disappointment very well...James

Midnight Dew
Member

since 2001-01-07

Posts 50
Forest Lake, MN

7 posted 2001-03-14 09:05 PM

Beautiful piece, yet again. Haunting and sad and powerful. Thank you very much for sharing something so personal with the world.

Nate Dogg
Senior Member

since 1999-11-15

Posts 1658
Georgia, Fulton

8 posted 2001-03-15 11:46 AM

A very sincere write...wonderful job!

Nathan

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