Open Poetry #12 |
The Mountain Of Tears |
seraphin Senior Member
since 2000-09-24
Posts 1004Michigan |
The Mountain of Tears A mountain awash in a trail of tears, the well-worn path lined in fears of failure, regret, and all mortal woes. The climb goes higher each step a rose in the garden of hope, where dreams do compare, with the wings of butterflies, light in the air lifting, rising, as each new soul nears, the top of this mountain, awash in tears. |
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Rosebud1229 Senior Member
since 2000-04-05
Posts 1813North Carolina |
Sometimes, it does take a few tears sometimes a river, but to get to the top of the mountain, to feel the freshness of the mountain air a renewal, makes you feel revived. |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
This is sadly beautiful, yet hopeful and so true to life! Into the library this goes. Take care, Melissa~ [This message has been edited by Melissa Honeybee (edited 02-12-2001).] |
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Saunni Senior Member
since 2000-07-11
Posts 1777West Virginia |
This is beautiful and sad but I sure can appreciate it. A great write... Sauni Sauni :) Have you ever known the color grey when the nighttime finds you weak I have, I've walked that road each time; that's where my angel sleeps |
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Nate Dogg Senior Member
since 1999-11-15
Posts 1658Georgia, Fulton |
I echo with what the others say...brilliant write!! Nathan |
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Dee Member Elite
since 2000-08-19
Posts 2330Queensland, Australia |
seraphin, you show hope through the tears. "where dreams do compare, with the wings of butterflies," This sounds like a place I'd like to be. Dee |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
SandraSandra~ 'each step a rose in the garden of hope' See it ? ... see it ? ... this is what I'm talking about~ I step the roses with you reaching that garden of hope eternal~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~ |
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