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Metromaniac (Senryu)
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Poeminister Senior Member
since 2000-02-26
Posts 1862Regina SK; Canada |
Metromaniac All day and all night, always half awake in dreams Verses I sleep-write |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
Excellent depiction of your title!!! |
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Breathe~ Member
since 2000-02-05
Posts 315Washington... |
Perfect! Perfect! I'll be driving along and all these words fly at me cluttering my windshield and my mind but when I get home, I draw a blank and all these wonderful images and ideas have disappeared... This poem is how I've been feeling! Maybe it is time to keep a notebook by the bed...  Thank you for this...I truly enjoyed.. I love the time and in between the calm inside me in the space where I can breathe... Sarah McLachlan |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
I know just what you mean. |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
OMG...you too!? Well sheesh, at least I know I'm in good company! |
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Rex Allen McCoy Member Elite
since 2000-01-30
Posts 2863Sippin a Timmy's in London |
I sleep like a log and seldom remember dreaming well written Poeminister I sometimes envy your 'predicament' |
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Krawdad Member Elite
since 2001-01-03
Posts 2597 |
Poe. . . Nice one! Watch out tho, this may be the cause of my insomnia and you may be next. Breathe~ You Must get that notebook! I've missed too many of those "whispers". I Always have a pocket pad handy! I feel downright naked without one. Scribble on your knee when your driving if that's what it takes, just get it down! Get out of bed when it sneaks up on you as you are falling asleep. You will not remember it in the morning no matter how hard you try. I never do. I get up and write it down. Don't lose any more of those good words! /:^)== =#== |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
I can relate to this one... A splendid senyru PoetFriend... Thank you for the enjoyable read... coco |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Definately know this........usually happens when I'm exhausted........or in the shower LOL Great write! -SEA |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
you know, you're right, this happens! "Every man dies. Not every man truly lives." Braveheart Kathleen |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
good read...gave me a smile and more |
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