Open Poetry #12 |
Consequence of Common Sense |
VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
Consequence of Common Sense Virginia Salter for every action an opposite equal reaction universe is governed well by same wild or tame common sense delays, deters adventures that might occur adventure to mountain top fall to valley floor adventure into pain of sin need I say more? common sense a sacrifice leading to mundane yet predictability’s comforting if it’s all the same no starlight in one’s eyes no adventure to one’s lips no calories piling experience upon one’s ample hips to taste of new can be so grand yet can leave a painful scar ergo much ado for common sense and you as to consequence of common sense, I include the loud refrain, is to live life as Walter Mitty safe adventures in one’s brain. © August 15, 2000 |
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JLR Senior Member
since 2001-02-04
Posts 1785 |
Ever enjoy you! I really love this one. |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
Thanks, JLR. Ummmm, have you gone by another name? From your response it seems you've been around awhile but your # of posts doesn't show that. Curious, I am. |
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Poeminister Senior Member
since 2000-02-26
Posts 1862Regina SK; Canada |
Wonderfully said. Enjoyed the read. Poeminister |
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Balladeer
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Lots of common sense here, Virginia. Keep the fantasies in the mind...they are much safer there..we act them out, we get in BIG trouble!!! |
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adagirl26 New Member
since 2001-02-11
Posts 4 |
I am loving my new moments here!!!!! |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
~S~ lots of them from reading you tonight ~Wynter "The worst prison would be a closed heart". ...Pope John Paul II |
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