Open Poetry #12 |
How? |
rosepetals25
since 2000-05-31
Posts 3076PA |
How do I say good-bye? When I have waited my whole life to find to find this amazing miracle of love? How do I tell my soul? You are not it's second half, that you won't be here forever. How do I not say I love you? When I hear your sweet voice, my heart so full of love for you. How do I accecpt what I know I must? Even though we are so in love, there is no way we can be together. How do I continue living? Without the person I simply adore, with the emptiness that haunts my heart? How do I deal with the pain? Of knowing you won't be mine, knowing I have to let you go. So tell me, how do I say good-bye? Without my faith in love dying? Without drowning in thesse tears of pain? |
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doreen peri Member Elite
since 1999-05-25
Posts 3812Virginia |
hey, very good questions... if you figure it out, let me know, k? *g cool poem |
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rosepetals25
since 2000-05-31
Posts 3076PA |
Doreen - I think it will be a long time until I figure those answers out.. but as soon as I do.. I promise to give ya the scoop . Thanks for stopping in. ~~Tara aka rp25 :o) |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
How do I say good-bye? When I have waited my whole life to find to find this amazing miracle of love? How do I tell my soul? You are not it's second half, that you won't be here forever. ================== oh I love this RP ... heartstings playing on high ... these are the hearts hardest questions... whether or not we have the answers... they make for beautiful poetry .. nice to see your smiling face here sweet poetess take care jm Where the touch of the lover ends And the soul of the friend begins There's a need to be separate and a need to be one And a struggle neither wins |
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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida |
big questions...only time will give you the answers.. great poem , g "maybe one day we can turn and face our fears maybe one day we can reach out through our tears..." -a grant |
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Jesse Jaymz Senior Member
since 2000-01-24
Posts 708Youngstown, ohio |
how do i forget the love that we once had? telling my heart that its finaly over and that i must move on. thats what i would have wrote. cuz you kno first hand how many times i have asked myself these same questions over and over. very beautiful and touching peice. and you know i will be there for you every step of the way. *huggles* fight on my friend love you jesse True beauty is often hidden in darkness... |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
Rosepetals, Wonderful questions here. Good luck on your search for the answers. Time will tell and it is amazing what the heart can endure. LW Poetry should surprise by fine excess...it should strike the reader as a wording of his own highest thoughts and appear almost a remembrance. -J.Keats |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Not sure there are any answers to these questions...only time will tell. Wonderful expression of the heartache that accompanies the reality of love and life sometimes. If you find yourself stranded in a storm ...then reach for my hand and we will play in the puddles together |
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