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Without A Shadow Of A Doubt
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Without A Shadow Of A Doubt |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989
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All of these obstacles that we are facing as your past you are now erasing will never be able to tear us apart as long as you believe, and follow your heart. When you look into my eyes see the truth, there are no lies there is only love felt deep inside and a joy that I can not hide. When you feel my touch caress your face time will stand still here in this place. A memory will be made between just two and you'll never need doubt my love for you. With every touch and every glance I'll fill your life with true romance then each night when you lay down to sleep I'll hold you in my arms to keep. Each morning then when you arise I'll look deep into your blue eyes and without a shadow of a doubt you'll know what this love is all about. I'll pull you close and hold you near I'll say these words without any fear and I'll hope you know these words are true when I softly whisper "I Love You" On the wings of words our spirits fly, and our souls are free. Donna Smith |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
Gentle Spirit..... This wonderful, and so is love when there isn't any doubt!! Nice writing.....I like the feel of this one..... ~~~ enjoy yourself ~~~ it's later than you think! |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
no there will be no doubt at all.....you shows your love with grace wonderful lovely piece....right from the heart. Charisma |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
wonderful GS. . . just wonderful. . .  ------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Thanks Sunny, and so right you are. Love is wonderful, and no doubts are even more wonderful. Charisma, first the love comes from the heart.....the words just seem to follow on paper sometimes. Thanks for reading my friend. Sven, thanks dear friend. Your pretty wonderful yourself. On the wings of words our spirits fly, and our souls are free. Donna Smith |
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DawnG
since 2000-06-23
Posts 1494United States |
This is just beautiful. Dawn |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Thank you for the kind reply Dawn. Enjoy life...this is NOT a dress rehearsal. *s* |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
when the right words....are said at the right time....there is never a doubt....wonderful write.... |
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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida |
love is a wonderful thing.. very nicely written  , g"...beyond the door, theres peace i'm sure...and i know there'll be no more tears in heaven..." clapton |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
beautifully done, sounds like everything is going wonderful for you...huggz ~Wynter/M "The worst prison would be a closed heart". ...Pope John Paul II |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
When a true love removes the doubts and fears...there is no stopping it. Wonderful write and I loved the flow in this one. It reads softly when read aloud. If you find yourself stranded in a storm ...then reach for my hand and we will play in the puddles together |
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snowpants Member Elite
since 2000-09-16
Posts 2061KS |
'When you feel my touch caress your face time will stand still here in this place. A memory will be made between just two and you'll never need doubt my love for you. With every touch and every glance I'll fill your life with true romance then each night when you lay down to sleep I'll hold you in my arms to keep.' This is some beautiful writing, Gentle Spirit! Definitely one I'm going to keep! Thanks for sharing this! sp  everytime I close my eyes, I see your face, I taste you on my lips... every night I fantasize that I can feel you on my fingertips... |
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JLR Senior Member
since 2001-02-04
Posts 1785 |
Loved it---but I am a sucker for love poems. Thanks for this one. It's precious. |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Snowpants, JLR, thanks so much for responding. I am sorry it has taken me so long to respond, but know how much I appreciate you both taking the time to read. *s* Enjoy life...this is NOT a dress rehearsal. *s* |
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