Open Poetry #12 |
Moccasins Trace.......... Marge Tindal |
Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
I wrote this humble poem for Marge, as she is a wonderful friend and inspiration. Thank you Marge for your wonderful friendship. Moccasins Trace Within the cry of a wolf Her voice will be heard Her spirit wanders on moccasins Leaves a trace of slightly prints Which shows that she exist Breeze of mystic reminisce Inside her coat of natures bliss Cascades moonlights kiss The beauty hue of her entrance Is guiding wolves dance Within symphony of elders flight By watchers of the sky And in her visions of the night She spreads the morning light While dawn embrace her silky skin Amiable love within She is the spirit of the light The elder of the night And yet she hears the wolves cry Supplications of wondering why And her spirit whispers in the wind Her moccasins leaves a vivid print To touch your heart with her concerns For love that wolves earns. Charisma ~TMP~ 09/02/01 [This message has been edited by Charisma (edited 02-10-2001).] |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
A marvelous tribute, and the voice of you sings through as a meadowlark on the prairie's wind... Well done Charisma...Marge will cry a tear of happiness to read this... |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Absolutely wonderful!! You've captured the spirit perfectly. |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Charisma~ This is WONDERFUL!! Marge is an angel..........so are you!!!! SEA |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
Sunshine: thank you for your wonderful comment my friend, and I truly hope that Marge will like it a little bit. Poet deVine: Thank you for the wonderful, I am glad that you liked it. Sea: I agree that Marge is a precious Angel and I am truly glad that you loved reading this one.....thank you for your wonderful reply my friend. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Charisma~ My goodness ... this is simply BEAUTIFUL ! What a loving spirit you are. Yes, a tear and a smile in thanks for your beautiful thoughts. Thank you for your thoughtfulness - always. I love you, friend. ~*Marge*~ *See, I even like the color well enough to swipe it ! ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Very nice...James |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
Marge: Thank you for th beautiful, I am really glad that you liked it....and it was a pleasure to write this one....and I thank you for your warm friendship and inspiration ....and glad that you liked the color too my friend. love you my dear friend. James: thank you my friend for reading and your nice comment. |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
forgot to make a thread, as this one didn't showed up in my library. |
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