navwin » Archives » Open Poetry #12 » Without you tonight (song repost)
Open Poetry #12
Post A Reply Post New Topic Without you tonight (song repost) Go to Previous / Newer Topic Back to Topic List Go to Next / Older Topic
Jesse Jaymz
Senior Member
since 2000-01-24
Posts 708
Youngstown, ohio

0 posted 2001-02-09 08:29 PM


hey yall
this is a song i wrote last summer.  i posted in in dark when i wrote it but a certain friend of mine told me to repost it in open so she could see it.     so this one is for her.  hope yall like it.  tell me what you think.  note, the letters above the words are what you would play on the guitar.     yup i loooove to play.  hope yall like it.
love to all
jesse

Without you tonight
By: Jesse Charles Jaymz

D                                             A
I wish that I could show you how much I love you
E                                              A
I wish that I could hold you by my side
D
I want to look into your big blue eyes
A
But all I can do is sit here and cry
E                                    A
I wish that I was with you tonight

A                                                      E
I know that theres been times that I have hurt you
E                                                             A
I know that theres been times I've made you cry
D                                             A
If I had a way to turn back the hands of time
E                                         A
Then I would have never siad goodbye

D                                                      A
I wish that I could show you how much I love you
E                                              A
I wish that I could hold you by my side
D
I want to look into your big blue eyes
A
But all I can do is sit here and cry
E                                     A
I wish that I was with you tonight

A                                                E
I know that you have found somebody new
E                                                       A
And that I'm no longer the man of your dreams
D                                     A
I should have givin in to my emotions
                    E                                      A
"Cuz then the man in your heart would be me

D                                                      A
I wish that I could show you how much I love you
E                                              A
I wish that I could hold you by my side
D
I want to look into your big blue eyes
A
But all I can do is sit here and cry
E                                    A
I wish that I was with you tonight

A                              E
As I lay here I begin to wonder
E                                                A
If your feeling the same way that I do
D                                            A
I would give up everything in the world
                  E                               A
To hear you wisper in my ear, I love you

D                                                       A
I wish that I could show you how much I love you
E                                              A
I wish that I could hold you by my side
D
Hunny Please give me a second chance
A
Lets give our love just one last dance
E                                   A
And let me be with you tonight
E                                 A  
Oh let me be with you tonight...


True beauty is often hidden in darkness...

© Copyright 2001 Jesse Jaymz - All Rights Reserved
snowpants
Member Elite
since 2000-09-16
Posts 2061
KS
1 posted 2001-02-09 09:14 PM


Beautiful, jesse!  Wonderful lyrics, and, since I don't know anything about music, chords and all that good stuff, I can only imagine how good it sounds to music too!  

sp  


...if I ride these dreams to the Irish Sea,
oh, even there, I know your heart rides with me...

dgvarner
Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552
High Springs, Florida
2 posted 2001-02-10 01:02 AM


wish i could play the guitar.. hey..how about one of them there recitals ??  

this is really nice jesse..it reminds me of some rick springfield lyrics..."love hurts when only one's in love..."  

that darned unrequited love...

hugs, g


"maybe one day
we can turn and face our fears
maybe one day
we can reach out through our tears..."
-a grant

Paula Finn
Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546
missouri
3 posted 2001-02-10 01:26 AM


Very nice Jess
Jesse Jaymz
Senior Member
since 2000-01-24
Posts 708
Youngstown, ohio
4 posted 2001-02-10 02:04 AM


snowpants:  first off i love your name.  very cute     thank you for liking my song.  i take alot of pride in my music and for someone to like it makes me happy     thank you

dgvarner: wow.  i am compared to someone famous.  now i am truly hounerd.  thank you very very very much.  you made me blush.     thank you

paula:   thank you for stoping bye and reading.  your output means alot to me.  thanks  

love to all
jesse


True beauty is often hidden in darkness...

rosepetals25
Deputy Moderator 5 Tours
Member Elite
since 2000-05-31
Posts 3076
PA
5 posted 2001-02-10 12:05 PM


Jesse,

   Seeeeeee!  I told you people would love it!  I already know I love it, I have told you that after I heard you sing it to me   I'm so glad you posted it in here



[This message has been edited by rosepetals25 (edited 02-10-2001).]

Jesse Jaymz
Senior Member
since 2000-01-24
Posts 708
Youngstown, ohio
6 posted 2001-02-10 05:35 PM


tara
*hughughughugs*  thank you for telling me to post this here.  i was sooooo nervous when i sang it to you.  i know you could tell how shy i was.     cuz i was blushing up a storm   but thank you for the insperation to post it.  i owe you laot for that.  thank you again.
love ya
jesse


True beauty is often hidden in darkness...

Broken_Winged_Angel
Senior Member
since 2000-04-06
Posts 994
Small Town, Somewhere
7 posted 2001-03-07 07:24 PM


Jesse,
I just wanted to let you know I've been thinking about you a lot lately. Everytime I've tried calling, there's no answer.. or it's a busy signal.. I'll keep trying and hope to see or hear from you soon..Always, BWA.



Your time is here. Take one last look at it, then never come back. This part of your life is already over...

Jesse Jaymz
Senior Member
since 2000-01-24
Posts 708
Youngstown, ohio
8 posted 2001-03-07 11:56 PM


hey you
*****HUUUUUUUGGGGGSSSSSSSSS* i missed you too. i got your page and your new addy. i will write you. i hope you got my letters to your old addy. let me know. talk to you soon *kiss*
love ya
jesse


True beauty is often hidden in darkness...

Post A Reply Post New Topic ⇧ top of page ⇧ Go to Previous / Newer Topic Back to Topic List Go to Next / Older Topic
All times are ET (US). All dates are in Year-Month-Day format.
navwin » Archives » Open Poetry #12 » Without you tonight (song repost)

Passions in Poetry | pipTalk Home Page | Main Poetry Forums | 100 Best Poems

How to Join | Member's Area / Help | Private Library | Search | Contact Us | Login
Discussion | Tech Talk | Archives | Sanctuary