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Poeminister
Senior Member

since 2000-02-26

Posts 1862
Regina SK; Canada

0 posted 2001-02-09 06:12 PM

It shant wilt or fold
Time will ever hold this rose
Gilded in soft gold

[This message has been edited by Poeminister (edited 02-10-2001).]

Moon Dust

Member Elite

since 1999-06-11

Posts 2177
Skelmersdale, UK

1 posted 2001-02-09 06:15 PM

lovely images

Honeybee
Member Ascendant

since 1999-12-26

Posts 5372
Ontario, CANADA

2 posted 2001-02-09 06:59 PM

Lovely!

You're really on a roll with these~

Take care,
Melissa~

VAS
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-16

Posts 7450
Oregon

3 posted 2001-02-09 07:14 PM

Beautiful!!! Romantically Victorian in nature.

SEA

Moderator

Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

4 posted 2001-02-09 11:20 PM

like memories held in place.............

SEA

Sven

Member Laureate

since 1999-11-23

Posts 14937
East Lansing, MI USA

5 posted 2001-02-09 11:22 PM

this is wonderful. . . I love the image that you used here as well. . .

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

CocoBaci
Member Elite

since 2000-05-06

Posts 3043

6 posted 2001-02-09 11:45 PM

Exquisitely said Poe...
I enjoyed the read...
~coco~

Victoria

Member Ascendant

since 2000-08-12

Posts 5869

7 posted 2001-02-10 12:19 PM

beautiful Poe...loved it..

~V~

Every child is an artist. The challenge is to remain an artist once he grows up.

Pablo Picasso

ATelamon
Member

since 2001-02-06

Posts 328
Purgatory, Last Staircase, Up

8 posted 2001-02-10 12:43 PM

Well done senryu, well done indeed.

Enjoyed this, quick to the heart of the matter. Very nice.

Paula Finn
Member Ascendant

since 2000-06-17

Posts 5546
missouri

9 posted 2001-02-10 01:48 AM

Let loves tender touch
Gild the heart from whence this rose
Bloomed for us to see

Charisma

Member Ascendant

since 2000-09-30

Posts 5906
lost in blue pages

10 posted 2001-02-10 05:49 AM

beautiful......just beautiful, is these lovely treat.

((hugs))
Charisma

Daniel J D
Senior Member

since 2000-10-01

Posts 1471
Hillcrest, Queensland, Australia

11 posted 2001-02-10 06:15 AM

Poeminister,
Very well put together. Fine work indeed.

Respond to my call and let the waves of my heart fill your life with the wonders of love
(Daniel J D)

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

12 posted 2001-02-10 11:00 AM

PoeMinister~

Rose forged in golden
memories, forever held
in beauty from pen

~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
[email protected]

Nan

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Member Seraphic

since 1999-05-20

Posts 21191
Cape Cod Massachusetts USA

13 posted 2001-02-10 11:15 AM

I have a gilded rose... and you're right - It's never wilted... Lovely words, Poe..

Waft every crest upon your destined sea.
Embrace the Wave of Serendipity,
Lest its elusive arcane ecstasy
Refurl with sail for all eternity.

A Whisper's Caress
Senior Member

since 2000-11-03

Posts 791
on the horizon of a fairytale

14 posted 2001-02-10 12:02 PM

absolutely wonderful....

May your dreams always dance to the rhythm of a lover's heartbeat...

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