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Déjà vu (or What is real)
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Déjà vu (or What is real) |
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Wilfred Yeats Member Elite
since 2000-08-04
Posts 2704Wilmington, Delaware 
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Dreaming dreams Scheming schemes Eyes wide open Or are they Loving you And the view Just we two Or are we What is love Is it a dove Of peace Most everlasting Or can we share A love so bare Give wings to roots We’re clasping I know it’s real For I can feel Unselfish With the real I know the deal You can’t conceal Despite my bed’s Aloneness My arms too My eyes their view Of empty skins caress Yet ears convince My mind they mince And tear my soul apart You voice succeeds And fills my needs Takes chill from my heart [This message has been edited by Wilfred Yeats (edited 02-07-2001).] |
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doreen peri Member Elite
since 1999-05-25
Posts 3812Virginia |
"You voice succeeds And fills my needs Takes chill from my heart" enjoyed this immensely, bill..... it's well written and clearly straight from the heart.... i loved the ending lines i quoted above... and to answer your question? nothing's real ... or is it? *wink*  |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Bill--so many questions...sometimes what is a dream is sweeter than what is real...and sometimes dreams are nightmares...yet, what is real, I believe...is a feeling, no mater what its source. Thoughtfilled poem. |
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Wilfred Yeats Member Elite
since 2000-08-04
Posts 2704Wilmington, Delaware |
Doreen - what can I say - I was "in a mood" - I feel certain you understand ~S~ - Thank you Martie- It's obvious you understand me ~S~ thank you |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
just the sound of the words "deja vu" offer up a mystical sensation all their own... as does this fine piece.... Well done Mr. Yeats.... |
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doreen peri Member Elite
since 1999-05-25
Posts 3812Virginia |
... yes... i totally understood... completely identified with this... for a minute i wondered if i wrote it.. |
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lucky Senior Member
since 2000-01-17
Posts 1601Idaho |
Bill, Déjà vu... you do know I'd never steal from you... Your style and mine, shall I say are a bit different... And I don't think I'm up for a change. Another good write Bill but I could never do as you... I think it was all those drugs back in he sizties you know college daze and haze... Must have fized my head. Your great, dale |
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Cerenity Member Elite
since 2000-02-16
Posts 2637Escondido-California |
Hi Wilfred, Very thought provoking, this I loved, thank you so much. Love, Cerenity "God doesn't have to be reminded that we exist. We have to be reminded that He exist!" (Writer Unknown) |
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Moon Dust
since 1999-06-11
Posts 2177Skelmersdale, UK |
thoughtful.... very nice  ~Maria~ |
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Wilfred Yeats Member Elite
since 2000-08-04
Posts 2704Wilmington, Delaware |
Karilea- Mystical - I think of Yogi Berra: "Deja vu - all over again" ~G~ - thanks (really) Doreen- Thank you Your reply constitutes as high a compliment as I could concieve Dale- No way - I love what you write - it is coherant to me w/o any funny stuff ~G~ Thank You Cerenity- Moon Dust- It was the mixed thoughts I had that provoked the write - ~S~ thank you |
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