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Love Sees... (Senryu)
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Love Sees... (Senryu) |
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Poeminister Senior Member
since 2000-02-26
Posts 1862Regina SK; Canada |
Love Sees Love sees the right route though not through the outer eyes Love is Clairvoyant [This message has been edited by Poeminister (edited 02-10-2001).] |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
When you are right, you're very good.... |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
wonderful thoughts....loved it my friend. Charisma |
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Poeminister Senior Member
since 2000-02-26
Posts 1862Regina SK; Canada |
Thank you Sunshine and Charisma. |
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Chelsea~ Member
since 2001-02-09
Posts 260Ontario, CANADA |
The last line really caught me, i really like this! |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
definately.............perfectly said  SEA |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
I believe you are very right, yet if love be clairvoyant and blind at the same time, are there merely lies in the seeing? |
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Meadowmuse Member Elite
since 1999-12-27
Posts 3263 |
I like your subtle use of rhyme within this piece (and your choice of words, naturally). (o: Your work is always so thoughtfully composed. Claire Could a greater miracle take place than for us to look through each other's eyes for an instant?......Henry David Thoreau |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
this is excellent. . . but I wonder just how clairvoyant love is. . .  good job. . . --------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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kcsgrandma Senior Member
since 2000-09-24
Posts 1522Presque Isle, ME |
This is nice. Isn't love clairvoyant in that it sees deep into the heart, where nobody but a lover can see? To love another person is to see the face of God. - Les Miserables Marilyn |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
PoeMinister~ Gaze in crystal ball Heart surpasses ritual Love knows all sees all ~*Marge*~ *Thanks for the musing inspiration~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
Lovely senryu PM well done ~HUG~ Tracie~ Love is the life of the soul... It is the harmony of the universe |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Very very well done...this is a talent I can't seem to capture but you have written this so very well!! Reality seldom bears the possibilities of imagination! |
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ATelamon Member
since 2001-02-06
Posts 328Purgatory, Last Staircase, Up |
Ah yes, methinks that love is blind to reason. Yet sees so clearly infinite possibilities. Perhaps love is but near-sighted. Nicely done. [This message has been edited by ATelamon (edited 02-11-2001).] |
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Severn Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704 |
Really well done...I am finicky over haikus and senryu's - but this one is great!  K- it was not an unmusical sound: long, falling, half a sigh, like wind in the wires, or a train distancing. The Muse of Distance, A. Williamson |
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