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It Began Softly
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It Began Softly |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England 
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It Began Softly Softly call me softly to you Feel the fire flowing through Touch the flame Fly again Beat your wings Hope springs It began softly It ends hotly Softly summon me to you Wrap my fire around you Hold the fire Free desire Bathe in heat Pulses beat It began softly It ends hotly Marsha Take back the hope you gave,- I claim Only a memory of the same Robert Browning |
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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace |
very nice......I like this alot! helen |
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LoveBug
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Member Elite
since 2000-01-08
Posts 4697 |
"Softly summon me to you Wrap my fire around you Hold the fire Free desire Bathe in heat Pulses beat It began softly It ends hotly" Wow... this is some beautiful writing. Beautiful emotions, my friend. Thanks for sharing "Where there is great love there are always miracles" -Cather "Love heals everything, and love is all there is"- Zukav |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Helen love, I'm really pleased you like this, not really anything except me playing again, but I am glad you liked it. Take care love Mushy  Lovebug, thank you love, I do appreciate it but it truly isn't anything very much. I was working on another story and needed a short break. And so I wrote this, took no time at all, so obviously no effort involved. Which normally translates to no real worth either. Anyway thank you truly Take care love Mushy Take back the hope you gave,- I claim Only a memory of the same Robert Browning |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
If this is just you playing love. . .please play some more. . .  wonderful. . . --------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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insect Senior Member
since 2000-04-22
Posts 1014 |
I feel like the moth being drawn to your flame! Hot poem with a soft touch |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoy the read |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Marsha~ again here you are being Saucy I really like this, but of course, you knew I would! -SEA |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
I love it when you play love...you do it so very well...great write |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
If Marsha be the song of love and playing is what she'll do Then I thank the heavens above she chose to play with me and you. Play on Marsha Kethry Those of us who refuse to risk and grow get swallowed up by life. Patty Hansen. |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
who says it has to end I want Part 2 "I walked beside the evening sea And dreamed a dream that could not be." George William Curtis |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
AD dear heart, thank you now all I need is someone willing to play with me You know that I rarely put effort into things and this was literally just because I needed a break from the story. (But maybe it will be worth it when I finally finish it) In the meantime this took my mind off it for a few hours. Thank you muchly loveTake care love as always Bubbles Insect love, thank you and I hope you don't singe your wings love. Take care love Mushy Vandan love thank you truly, I'm pleased that you enjoyed it Take care Mushy Circe love, Saucy, c'est moi, surely not! (Look of innocence, damm I can never pull that off) I knew you'd like it, I thought it would encourage you to keep warm With your husband of course.Thank you love Take care love Mushy Paula dear heart, you're such a darling and such a fibber. But I love you for it anyway, thank you muchly for being you Take care love as always Mushy Kethry dear heart, you're definitely biased love, because you see good in it all. And as long as my friends are wrapped around my heart I shall always have more of a gift than I deserve Thank you love Take care love as always Slushy Kathleen love, you too are biased love, and I thank you for all you are. Thank you truly love Take care love as always Mushy Take back the hope you gave,- I claim Only a memory of the same Robert Browning |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Whew |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Kari dear heart, What is it, are you getting warm? Thank you love Take care love as always Majestic Marsha Take back the hope you gave,- I claim Only a memory of the same Robert Browning |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Marsha~ Enjoyed this piece very much. I liked the softness of your thoughts. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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Beverley Member
since 2000-07-09
Posts 97England |
Margie dear heart, you always say the sweetest things, and I love you for it. Okay I'll submit, I'm a poet that doesn't know it! Thank you love Take care as always love Mushy And while thy willing soul transpires At every pore with instant fire Andrew Marvell 1621-1678 |
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Poeminister Senior Member
since 2000-02-26
Posts 1862Regina SK; Canada |
I love batheing in the heat of your words. Wonderful write. Poeminister "...no single sound too rude upon thy slumber shall intrude, Our thoughts, our souls- O God above! In every deed shall mingle, love." -Poe |
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Beverley Member
since 2000-07-09
Posts 97England |
Poeminister love, thank you muchly, in which case love you will like the latest flames. I'm pleased you like this one. It is as I said more stretching and I must admit I do enjoy seeing my mentors finally seeing some return on their work. Believe me it's been a very slow learning curve. Thank you Take care as always love Mushy Puck Bev de Bump And while thy willing soul transpires At every pore with instant fire Andrew Marvell 1621-1678 |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Just the way it is supposed to be. Very nice writing and well expressed in the thoughts and images it brings forth. |
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