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Fairy tale twinkle ?
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Fairy tale twinkle ? |
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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace 
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Fairy tale twinkle ? twinkle, twinkle little star I do not wonder where you are he's in another's arms tonight when I'm alone, who holds me tight you go out, say you won't be long nursery rhyme ask, where's daddy gone hush little baby, with me your not alone as old king cole breathes unfamiliar cologne so, Mary has my little lamb how do i hold together? with toast and jam? keeping secrets of so much strife woven in this fairy tale life well, now I lay me down to sleep no more tears for me to weep someone pass the poison apple please when i wake up I'll find my keys [This message has been edited by 1slick_lady (edited 02-08-2001).] |
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Celeste Senior Member
since 2000-11-11
Posts 597 |
Oh ouch!!!!!! This is really well written. I love the strength that's woven in it. It shines through wonderfully, in spite of the painful subject. To capture and live a moment is truly living |
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kcsgrandma Senior Member
since 2000-09-24
Posts 1522Presque Isle, ME |
You really got my attention here with your weaving of nursery rhymes into a story that is definitely not for children. It's very creative. And to make it even better, it flows nicely, too. A very worthwhile read, overall. To love another person is to see the face of God. - Les Miserables Marilyn |
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