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SEA
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with you

0 posted 2001-02-07 11:11 PM




I remember so much about you
The instant connection………friendship
The laughter………..your eyes


I remember the times we had together
The intimacy………of sharing our souls
The bond of trust………….safety

I remember the fun too
Always something going on
Such crazy things we'd do

I remember the happiness
The sound of your voice………late at night
Sharing poetry……………opening hearts

I remember the feelings
I thought somehow………..would never change
Would never end……….only grow stronger

I remember you
~ My friend ~
And the warmth always found ………………in your smile


I miss you so much
~SEA~



© Copyright 2001 S.E. A - All Rights Reserved
Daniel J D
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1 posted 2001-02-07 11:43 PM


SEA,
Such wonderful memories. Keep them deep in your heart so that each beat keeps nurturing that friendship.


Respond to my call and let the waves of my heart fill your life with the wonders of love
(Daniel J D)

Janet Marie
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2 posted 2001-02-08 12:37 PM


I remember the times we had together
The intimacy………of sharing our souls
The bond of trust………….safety
===============
somethings never leave us ... somethings never should ...
you know ... I know ...  
ya know I love this one too


Tomorrow holds only mystery
And who's to say what might be
But in you I've found a love so strong
The sun and the moon look on in jealousy
~VH~

Denise
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3 posted 2001-02-08 12:38 PM


This is soooo lovely, SEA!!
Poeminister
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4 posted 2001-02-08 11:57 AM


A Lovely remembrance with these words. Wonderful write.

Poeminister

"...no single sound too rude upon thy slumber shall intrude, Our thoughts, our souls-
O God above! In every deed shall mingle, love."
-Poe


ethome
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5 posted 2001-02-08 11:59 AM


This is a beautiful expression of your reflections Sea!

Reality seldom bears the possibilities of imagination!

whiskey
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6 posted 2001-02-08 12:07 PM


SEA this is wonderful I really liked it alot
special memories like this we should keep safe forever  


Julie

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7 posted 2001-02-08 06:17 PM


What a nice tribute to a special friend...its those kind of memories we hold forever dear in our hearts  
Pixydust
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8 posted 2001-02-08 11:06 PM


I feel as though we are going through the same thing. Beautifully written, though sad to know you are apart from someone who means so much. Thanks for sharing!  
Pixydust

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9 posted 2001-02-08 11:24 PM


What lovely expressions SEA.  
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10 posted 2001-02-08 11:26 PM


'I remember so much about you
The instant connection………friendship
The laughter………..your eyes'

It was hard to pick favorite lines because the whole thing is fantastic, but these are great!  Love it!!

sp  


...if I ride these dreams to the Irish Sea,
oh, even there, I know your heart rides with me...

Mark Bohannan
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11 posted 2001-02-09 06:44 AM


Beautiful memories found in this one for sure.  You pen your feelings so well and make them so easy for the reader to grasp on to.  Wonderful write.

If you find yourself stranded in a storm
...then reach for my hand and we will play in the puddles together

Charisma
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12 posted 2001-02-09 07:07 AM


wonderful Sea, loved it.

Charisma

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13 posted 2002-03-30 06:43 PM




(smiles) Awwwwwwwww, this is soooooo lovely, sweet friend, may your friend always be a friend in you and always fill you with smiles like you shared before! (kiss on cheek) This is wonderful, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Susan, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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14 posted 2003-01-27 11:18 AM


smiling here, but kinda sad too
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