Open Poetry #12 |
It Was Your Smile.......... |
SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
I remember so much about you The instant connection………friendship The laughter………..your eyes I remember the times we had together The intimacy………of sharing our souls The bond of trust………….safety I remember the fun too Always something going on Such crazy things we'd do I remember the happiness The sound of your voice………late at night Sharing poetry……………opening hearts I remember the feelings I thought somehow………..would never change Would never end……….only grow stronger I remember you ~ My friend ~ And the warmth always found ………………in your smile I miss you so much ~SEA~ |
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Daniel J D Senior Member
since 2000-10-01
Posts 1471Hillcrest, Queensland, Australia |
SEA, Such wonderful memories. Keep them deep in your heart so that each beat keeps nurturing that friendship. Respond to my call and let the waves of my heart fill your life with the wonders of love (Daniel J D) |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
I remember the times we had together The intimacy………of sharing our souls The bond of trust………….safety =============== somethings never leave us ... somethings never should ... you know ... I know ... ya know I love this one too Tomorrow holds only mystery And who's to say what might be But in you I've found a love so strong The sun and the moon look on in jealousy ~VH~ |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
This is soooo lovely, SEA!! |
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Poeminister Senior Member
since 2000-02-26
Posts 1862Regina SK; Canada |
A Lovely remembrance with these words. Wonderful write. Poeminister "...no single sound too rude upon thy slumber shall intrude, Our thoughts, our souls- O God above! In every deed shall mingle, love." -Poe |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
This is a beautiful expression of your reflections Sea! Reality seldom bears the possibilities of imagination! |
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whiskey
since 1999-12-28
Posts 1278Australia |
SEA this is wonderful I really liked it alot special memories like this we should keep safe forever Julie |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
What a nice tribute to a special friend...its those kind of memories we hold forever dear in our hearts |
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Pixydust Junior Member
since 2001-01-14
Posts 36 |
I feel as though we are going through the same thing. Beautifully written, though sad to know you are apart from someone who means so much. Thanks for sharing! Pixydust |
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Eloise Senior Member
since 1999-11-27
Posts 1096Wyoming |
What lovely expressions SEA. |
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snowpants Member Elite
since 2000-09-16
Posts 2061KS |
'I remember so much about you The instant connection………friendship The laughter………..your eyes' It was hard to pick favorite lines because the whole thing is fantastic, but these are great! Love it!! sp ...if I ride these dreams to the Irish Sea, oh, even there, I know your heart rides with me... |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Beautiful memories found in this one for sure. You pen your feelings so well and make them so easy for the reader to grasp on to. Wonderful write. If you find yourself stranded in a storm ...then reach for my hand and we will play in the puddles together |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
wonderful Sea, loved it. Charisma |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(smiles) Awwwwwwwww, this is soooooo lovely, sweet friend, may your friend always be a friend in you and always fill you with smiles like you shared before! (kiss on cheek) This is wonderful, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Susan, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
smiling here, but kinda sad too |
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